Humbling Self

Removing the sharpness
 of doubts corners
 Rounding off the edges
 of borrowed defeats 
 No room for either
 at this table of peace

 Examining the discards
 with prayer
 clothed in the sackcloth
 of meekness
 the spirit bends knees
 in humbled repentance

 Meekness bids the oil
 of forgiveness
 as humility bows
 to understanding
 while the ashes 
 beg the embers
 from stronger hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ebbs Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Congrats on your win, enjoyed this :)
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:24 PM
such wonderful wise words - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Hi Debra, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
A   Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Debra, congratulations on your win... LINDA
Haight Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Such words of wisdom, Debra. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
Eaton Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 3:57 PM
So true. Congrats on the win
Carmack Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 1:00 PM
I love this poem and it's wisdom. Thanks for participating.
Squyres Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Thank you, Rob for placing my words in your contest. Truly honored to be among such wonderful poems by some of soup's finest poets.
Johnson Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 9:52 PM
We look within to see without. To seek the truth and quell the doubt. A passive presence that fills the soul. And somehow torn apart, you're whole. Peace. :)
Fox Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Bend low young lady ! Doubts do have sharp corners ! Keep them sharp or go down !
Squyres Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Not sure what you meant by this comment... ??? Keep them sharp or go down??? ... hmmmm???
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