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Culling

From loss, Love’s searching might
Kill doves with pine and spite


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Entrant: Rob Carmack
Contest: In it's Essence
Form: Verse : Essence
10.12.14

Copyright © Rob Carmack | Year Posted 2014

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Keith Bickerstaffe

December 29, 2015 at 11:55 PM

Cleverly contrived with a pleasing rhyme and cadence. So much inferred in so few words... Bravo my friend! Best wishes, Keith

September 28, 2015 at 1:18 AM

I like this... A good description of love on the rebound. Hugs.

October 19, 2014 at 11:04 AM

amazing, it creates a vivid scene in my mind,rob.. . thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!

October 20, 2014 at 4:22 PM

You are welcome, and thank you too.

October 15, 2014 at 11:46 PM

I want to thank everyone for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2014 at 3:48 PM

Hey, I see this one won. BIG congrats, Rob.

October 15, 2014 at 12:17 PM

Wonderful,a super one that will lead anyday; congrats Rob.

October 15, 2014 at 11:36 AM

Beautiful expressions, congrats on the win, carmack

October 15, 2014 at 10:35 AM

Well done, this one sings. Congratulations on your fine win.

October 15, 2014 at 9:56 AM

many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

October 15, 2014 at 8:42 AM

Congratulations with love and prayers, Gina

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 15, 2014 at 8:13 AM

Congratulations on your win Rob.

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