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Missing and Knowing

Missing
Your hand in mine
My weary heart has swept
The wishes into dreams that kept
You here

Knowing
Fate can’t deny
What two souls take and bind
On the other side, I will find
You there

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Poem Written: 12.24.14
Traditional Cinquain
Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem #3
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © Rob Carmack | Year Posted 2014

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FJ Thomas Date: 3/7/2018 12:08:00 AM This is beautifully sad Rob. Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 5/26/2017 11:12:00 AM Nice piece. I missed it. Congrats. Login to Reply

Julia Ward Date: 9/28/2015 1:20:00 AM A beautiful poem! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/30/2015 6:40:00 PM Rob, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/29/2015 10:36:00 AM hey, I had written below here that it was one of MY favorites of your poems too. Congrats, you chose well the poem to enter in THIS contest. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/28/2015 9:23:00 AM This is sad, congrats on your win Rob. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/28/2015 12:45:00 AM Rob, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/27/2015 8:24:00 PM Congrats on your win, Rob! Love, KIm Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/27/2015 3:43:00 AM the longing shouts to be heard Rob Congrats on placing hugs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2015 2:25:00 PM this remains one of my favorites of your poetry! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/2/2015 2:32:00 PM One of my very favorites and it did not make it on the winner list. I feel for ya, mine did not either. congrats though for having what I think is one of the best ones! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 1/1/2015 1:16:00 PM Beautiful Cinquain, Rob. Deep emotions of longing...the missing and the knowing. So much conveyed in so few words. Best wishes for the contest...and for the New Year. Sandra Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/31/2014 8:45:00 AM Oh....love this. The content...the contest is so deep and strong and sweet. Lovely...If we only kept the other side more in our minds...we would save ourselves so much heartache... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/29/2014 12:35:00 AM I much prefer this traditional style to modern. This is one time when traditional cannot be beat and yours is one of the best I have seen for this contest. Love it!! Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/25/2014 6:45:00 AM Rob I love your Cinquain. It flows very nicely and speaks loud and clear. I better take another look at mine. That is what I love about being here. Other poets like yourself inspire me to do better. I hope you have had a great holiday so far. Merry Christmas. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/24/2014 7:42:00 PM Rob,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply