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Missing and Knowing

Missing Your hand in mine My weary heart has swept The wishes into dreams that kept You here Knowing Fate can’t deny What two souls take and bind On the other side, I will find You there ------------------------------------------- Poem Written: 12.24.14 Traditional Cinquain Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem #3 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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FJ Thomas

Date: 3/7/2018 12:08:00 AM

This is beautifully sad Rob.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/26/2017 11:12:00 AM

Nice piece. I missed it. Congrats.

Julia Ward

Date: 9/28/2015 1:20:00 AM

A beautiful poem!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/30/2015 6:40:00 PM

Rob, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 10:36:00 AM

hey, I had written below here that it was one of MY favorites of your poems too. Congrats, you chose well the poem to enter in THIS contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2015 9:23:00 AM

This is sad, congrats on your win Rob.

Skat A

Date: 6/28/2015 12:45:00 AM

Rob, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/27/2015 8:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Rob! Love, KIm

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/27/2015 3:43:00 AM

the longing shouts to be heard Rob Congrats on placing hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2015 2:25:00 PM

this remains one of my favorites of your poetry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:32:00 PM

One of my very favorites and it did not make it on the winner list. I feel for ya, mine did not either. congrats though for having what I think is one of the best ones!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/1/2015 1:16:00 PM

Beautiful Cinquain, Rob. Deep emotions of longing...the missing and the knowing. So much conveyed in so few words. Best wishes for the contest...and for the New Year. Sandra

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/31/2014 8:45:00 AM

Oh....love this. The content...the contest is so deep and strong and sweet. Lovely...If we only kept the other side more in our minds...we would save ourselves so much heartache...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2014 12:35:00 AM

I much prefer this traditional style to modern. This is one time when traditional cannot be beat and yours is one of the best I have seen for this contest. Love it!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/25/2014 6:45:00 AM

Rob I love your Cinquain. It flows very nicely and speaks loud and clear. I better take another look at mine. That is what I love about being here. Other poets like yourself inspire me to do better. I hope you have had a great holiday so far. Merry Christmas.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2014 7:42:00 PM

Rob,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~