Before I even watched your birth, I had already failed you first. Collecting bones in closets damned. To proxies labor done withstand. Mistakes go down with Jacks and cokes. A childhood ends in perished hopes. The years apart we will to stand. Regret to always catch the man. My sorrow carving name in stone, A Father never dies alone.
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