A Maryland Summer

Our Robin’s nest on twenty-eighth bayside,
strung like the Kite’s Loft display.
Free and now flowed with the tide,
as we watched the sunrise of each day.

Center courts of youth and bouncing Penns
pushed full throttle jet skis into romances.
The moon lit footprints in amends,
as Hope laid us down with chances.

The sun’s vixens sat on boardwalk benches,
their penthouses held one night Seacrets.
Tired of searching for pearls in surf’s trenches,
an open air preacher passed out leaflets.

Dice throws into Fate and riptides,
doused by sea foam and sand bars.
Eastern block girls ran carousel rides,
their accents glazed smiles and fast cars.

Ribeye’s and tuna steaks on the grill,
Harbor Island’s slow gas dock --
a seventy-foot fishing boat it couldn’t fill.
Canvas Sperry’s dried on a sundial clock. 

The one Turtle that sat near Jamestown,
looking up and down coastal highway.
The Greenest oasis we could find in uptown,
seagulls carried her eggs far away.

To days fully lived and expressed.
To what was held and what transcends.
To goodbyes and route fifty going west.
To that summer and all the friends.

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Contest: Memories of the Sea
Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
05.14.15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/2/2016 7:44:00 AM
Full of colorful imagery and outstanding phrasing... '...pushed full throttle jet skis into romances,' '...to goodbyes and route fifty going west.' A marvelous sense of atmosphere pervades this piece. Well done Rob! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:44:00 AM
An evocative poem, much enjoyed.
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:49:00 AM
Hi, Again, Rob!! How's it going today?
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:39:00 PM
Brilliantly descriptive, great wordplay and a superb sense of place. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 5/21/2015 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win!
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Date: 5/19/2015 1:11:00 AM
Very well done images Rob, and congratulations on placing..'
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Date: 5/18/2015 1:46:00 PM
you pulled me in, rob.. this tender write will stay long on my mind.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:53:00 PM
Rob, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/16/2015 9:34:00 PM
Thank You Linda.
Date: 5/16/2015 10:27:00 AM
nice win.... SKAT
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/16/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Skat.
Date: 5/16/2015 2:21:00 AM
Wow loved the way you have described the whole scene... the little things that happened at the moment as you observed the surrounding... all small stories within a story... a7... nadiya
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/16/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you Poesy.
Date: 5/15/2015 11:29:00 PM
this has a lot of cool lines in it, rob. I really loved the third and fourth stanzas, how you described the girls on the boardwalk. And so cute how you called it SEAcrets. The ending was really nice too. What it held certainly DOES transcend all time!!! I don't know how you placed, but this is one of your more enjoyable poems. Congrats.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/16/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. It is a summer I will never forget. I wish I would have lived another summer there. Thank you for reading and your comment.
Date: 5/15/2015 12:38:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/15/2015 10:32:00 PM
Thanx Jan.
Date: 5/15/2015 2:39:00 AM
wow what incredible imagery Rob - good luck in the contest:-) I love all the unique interpretations of the theme:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/15/2015 2:46:00 AM
Thanks Jan, sorry about the comment below, I think it happens when someone posts as someone else responds.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/15/2015 2:44:00 AM
Thank you Catie. Lovers and Haters :)
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