Rainbow

It struts peacock-like when the rains have gone,
but visible from only the one side,
to folk who from behind sun shines upon,
those facing its bright rays will be denied.
Get closer, as the superstitious do,
and hopes arise with each step they draw near,
in vain seeking treasure, although they knew
the closer they get, it would disappear.
From far off we must seem the happy pair,
our faithfulness tied bow-like round the years,
but close up lie the strains, the wear and tear,
frustrated arguments that no-one hears.
Our hearts not washed in seven coloured stain
rainbow faded, long showers still remain.

For contest 'Rainbows', sponsor Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nicole Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 7:46 PM
I smile when a Rain-Bow appears. :) Knowing that rain and the sunshine have kissed. (Soft Smile) Me and my poetic thoughts. You have created a Masterpiece here with your words. Congratulations Viv, on this win. ~ Brandy
Carmack Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Very clever and done nicely. Another fav here. Congrats Viv.
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:30 AM
...Three tears for this weeping rainbow" Beautifully done Viv. That last couplet a bow on the strains of life.
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Viv. A great poem.
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:24 AM
Thanks, Line, a pleasant surprise! Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 10:05 PM
This is really beautiful Viv! It is going straight into my Faves! Congratulations on your wonderful Second Placement my friend! xxoo : )
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:24 AM
Thanks, Connie, very kind x
Leiser Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 7:23 PM
This is my favorite rainbow poem, Viv! So imaginative and creative linking it with relationships. Congrats on your win! :)
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:25 AM
Thanks Laura, it was a toughie given the criteria. Viv x
Cornish Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 6:52 PM
The analogy of a rainbow to a relationship is very artistic and original and leaves one pondering and revisiting your thoughtful words. And, all wrapped subtly in a sonnet very well done.
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:26 AM
Thanks, Craig, much appreciated, given your criteria and your mastery of the form, I am honoured. Regards, Viv
Lindley Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Loved every verse of this exceptional sonnet my friend. Reality tells us that fairy-tales are just that- an illusion. Life is hard and we fight to survive and still have peace . A fav my friend..
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:26 AM
Thanks Robert, very nice of you. Hopee you and yours are well. Regards, Viv
Laurie Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:42 AM
G'day Viv ... I enjoyed the way you intertwined the rainbow with reality Viv - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Thanks Lindsay, I promise to get back to some buffoonery soon. Best wishes to you and yours in upside-downland. Regards, Viv
Cunningham Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Lovely sonnet Viv, a form I've grown to love thanks to you. My trubute to the king of flat pack lol. Tom.
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Thanks, Tom!
Murray Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Such a sad end for this particular rainbow.
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Indeed, but one must express as one feels of burst. Viv x
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 2:04 AM
Beautiful in content and creativity, Vic. Most impressed by the final lines! ~ Regards // paul
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:28 AM
Thanks Paul, took a while to get my head round it. Not because my head is big, or anything...... Regards, Viv
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 11:03 PM
I can actually say my daughter and I were bathed in rainbow light when we crossed a bridge that went directly into the end of a rainbow. I half expected to see the colors appear on my car but elusive they were. Usually you cannot chase a rainbow. You wrote a great entry for this contest Viv. I hope he appreciates it as much as I did! : )
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 9:25 PM
What a magnificent sonnet on the rainbow, Viv! Wow! Loved the creative angle with which you approached the subject. Good luck in the contest :)
Wigley Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Thanks, Laura, tricky to avoid cliche, worth a try, though. Viv x
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