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Quadro - Western Stars

Denied western stars. Memories open windows, but it is up to you if golden rays leave smiles or scars. ------------------------------------------------- Date: 01.12.17 Contest: Quadro Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2017 3:37:00 PM

Coming back to this excellent verse to say HELLO, Rob. I hope you are having a great day.

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/7/2017 11:47:00 PM

The power of the moment. The power of the other person. Such power, Rob. : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2017 3:49:00 PM

ok, waiting for more poems again!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/31/2017 9:06:00 AM

So much in such few lines. Really fine writing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/17/2017 7:13:00 PM

Very nice. Congratulations on your win with this fine Quadro. Hugs, Dane Ann

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/18/2017 2:27:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting Dane Ann .. Hugs.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 12:56:00 PM

So very well done, congratulations Rob...

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/18/2017 2:26:00 AM

Thank you Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2017 3:35:00 PM

wow, Rob, this is impressive work in this little poem. I am so glad you found your muse in this challenge of Nette's! Congras for your win. The message is beautifully portrayed.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thank You Andrea.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 1/15/2017 1:38:00 PM

It is strange. Some people saw sunrise some saw sunset. I wonder if there was something to that. I saw sunset as you did. Congratulations.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2017 11:05:00 PM

I think there is something to that. Thanks Janis.

Mark Martin

Date: 1/15/2017 1:09:00 PM

Also denied the sunset. Unique idea - like it! Congrats Rob! :-)

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thanks Mark.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/15/2017 12:08:00 PM

I like this unique take of yours, Rob. You probe suggestively, but leave it to us to make the final decision! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2017 11:43:00 AM

rob, i was taken by how you interpreted the theme; well delivered... sweet congrats on your win and thanks for participating!..huggs

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2017 11:04:00 PM

Thank you Nette. Hugs squared.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/15/2017 11:25:00 AM

Awesome. Love the last line. Congrats on your win, Rob. Agnes

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2017 11:04:00 PM

TY Agnes.