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Unsayable Gospel

Turned over to a sexual revolution, evolved to hijacked rainbows. Graceless hearts deprave the mind, a diseased façade of freedom, to redefine every right and wrong. Prophesied last days ushering the Bride of Christ persecuted. ----------------------------------------------------- Contest: Unsayable Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Written: 11.22.17

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Old Buck

Date: 3/10/2018 11:36:00 AM

Rob: And He will say: Well done, good and faithful servant. You pretty much covered it all here. This is a bed of our own making, now we must sleep in it. Thank you for sharing this with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/12/2018 6:26:00 PM

The older I get, the more I realize just how profoundly we are lost. It is very sobering.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/14/2018 6:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win. A win from Nette is no small feat.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/14/2018 6:12:00 PM

Sorry I haven’t been around. You have always been such a good friend to me. It is appreciated though not stated enough. I absolutely love this piece of writing. You write as well as any poet I have read. The message may be debatable(although not in my case) but the execution is flawless as well as inspiring to people like myself who are trying to learn how to write. This is a fav for me. Lots Of Love Rob straight from my heart, armand.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/15/2018 7:37:00 PM

No problem concerning not being around, I know how it is, never enough time. Thank you for your kind comment and I am glad I inspire you, but I have no idea what I am doing.

Becca Teagan

Date: 1/27/2018 1:15:00 PM

You do speak the truth. Things are getting worse, and these seem to be the last days. well done, friend.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/3/2018 2:47:00 AM

Thanks Becca.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/1/2018 2:16:00 AM

Congrats on the win, hell even Trump won, these days anyone can!!!

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2018 3:15:00 PM

Indeed these days are making anything possible. We are going to accelerate ourselves right off the track.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2017 8:00:00 PM

Hey, Congratulations, Rob. I finally need to get upstairs. Got three hours of test correcting done and now it's kitchen time (sing it to MC Hammer's Hammer time!)

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2018 3:15:00 PM

Thank you friend!