Delicacy of Leaves

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August 23, 2012

Crash! Bang! Poof! The angry leaves assault my roof
My canine friend turns end to end, and cries out with a woof
I grab my rake and take a break, enjoying autumn's show
No haste to battle Zephyr's breath, with such a fine tableau

Then a pause and silence falls, and time slows to a crawl
Molecules of red and gold in fractal loops enthrall
Leafy fingers stroke my brow, a delicate caress
Cares and worries leave my mind and harried thoughts regress

A second seems forever as I'm lost in reverie
A timeless crystal moment of deep serenity
Then I stir, my eyes unblur and I roll up my sleeves
I put my mind in focus, and begin to rake the leaves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/18/2015 3:19:00 PM
Roy, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/10/2015 4:40:00 PM
Roy, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem of a golden moment, a perfect 7
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Date: 4/10/2015 3:00:00 PM
Enjoyed immensely. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/9/2015 2:45:00 AM
big cheers on your win, roy... a most descriptive, personal write!
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:29:00 PM
Congrats Roy on your win!
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win... wonderful write and a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/8/2015 9:35:00 AM
Often, it only takes a moment to reflect and restore our sense of happiness....these are treasured moments we often don't appreciate quite enough. The heart of a poet is more likely to see, and appreciate this brief breath of happiness !! Love this!
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Date: 4/8/2015 5:51:00 AM
I like your style with this. An excellent write. Congrats.
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:15:00 PM
Roy, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new upcoming week. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA*
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:40:00 AM
really enjoyable read Roy, you sound a poet who likes to do things differently, must read more of your work, thanks for sharing, have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 3/27/2013 3:41:00 PM
I read your ("about the poem") story....and then the poem......your friend would be smiling to read that you met the challenge! :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:18:00 AM
Love your poem Roy~Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:13:00 PM
Roy, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 2/24/2013 5:26:00 PM
roy, I am glad to finally have seen this one. I read your "about this poem" part. It's so cool when friends inspire us this way. That's how I got on the road to writing a lot. A friend gave me a personal challenge just like this one!
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Date: 12/6/2012 11:51:00 PM
I like this! It reminds us to take a moment and just breathe - that even the most unlikely thing can effect our lives when we least expect it. Well penned Roy!
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Vicky!
Date: 11/27/2012 10:49:00 PM
I loved the rhyming scheme of your poem. Such an enjoyable read. Great write!
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:13:00 PM
the best poem i read for the day love you you see enjoy mother nature with all her elements profound
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