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Songs of a Setting Sun

dusk’s curtain ends a bird’s melody what of your legacy tick tock amends near the sum of days are you still in old ways for what transcends your last setting sun have you left it undone -------------------------------------------------------- Contest: Questionku Two Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux 10.20.15

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Date: 4/17/2018 9:02:00 AM
Very deep Rob. Three questions to which most of us wouldn't like the answer ...had to read again.
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Date: 4/18/2018 1:11:00 AM
TY Flo for taking the time to read and comment, twice.
Date: 4/11/2018 3:50:00 PM
Introspective beauty Rob :)
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Date: 5/6/2017 3:24:00 AM
Lovely imagery and a clever write. I like how each individual 'ku stands alone but together form a cohesive whole. Regards, John.
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:13:00 AM
Epic, wonderful and outstanding. What a great share!
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Date: 12/23/2015 11:39:00 AM
wow loved this one Rob...
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Date: 11/23/2015 1:32:00 AM
Time waits for no-one, Rob, and yes, we should check our affairs. A thoughtful piece. regards, Viv
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Date: 11/19/2015 3:55:00 PM
thanks for the visit today. I will check quickly to see if I have already seen all your recent posts or not.
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Date: 11/11/2015 9:14:00 AM
Great to have read this today. Got me some thinking to do. I'd say they are the most important questions. And I think I'd try this form.
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:27:00 PM
I had to study Questionku, a new one for me. Excellent 4, 5, 6 with last line question! Also excellent flow of thoughts to end any day. Love it! ~ Susan
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:41:00 PM
Well done. It is difficult to create a thurough introduction in 3 lines, but you did it. Then following it up with deep inquiries. Breat job being able to say so much in such a limitted format. Great Job!!
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Date: 11/10/2015 4:29:00 PM
love it
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Date: 11/10/2015 3:32:00 PM
Loved it Rob! cReate some ore allusios for us!
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:39:00 PM
Mind tingling approach with questions that makes one think!!
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:45:00 PM
Marvelous my friend do come by and visit me
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:03:00 PM
A beautiful Questionku. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:01:00 AM
Wonderful ku. I'd have to say that I have a preference for the middle one -you know, incase anyone was asking. Best of luck in the comp.
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Date: 11/5/2015 9:45:00 AM
Well-written string of 'qu. The reader has some pondering to do...
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Date: 10/28/2015 8:12:00 AM
Hey, congratulations, you are being showcased today. I got a notice in my hotmail to read your poems. but I think I have already read them all!! Have a great day, my friend.
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Date: 10/28/2015 7:15:00 AM
Good write
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Date: 10/28/2015 2:02:00 AM
Great poem but I would like it expanded.
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Date: 10/27/2015 6:11:00 PM
Excellent Questionku.
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:18:00 AM
Great questions we all need to ask, Rob. I enjoyed your thoughts on this. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Date: 10/26/2015 2:14:00 AM
thought provoking write Rob - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 AM
Deep, and thought provoking work, Rob. Congratulations on a fine piece. Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/25/2015 9:46:00 PM
rob, I do that ten miles added on to speed limit too!! Why can't others be that smart?
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