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Alone

wooed by the comfort of others and worldly things ideals stall change they visit but never stay leaving us tired and alone ------------------------------------------ Contest: One New Tanka Sponsor: Rick Parise 03.09.15

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FJ Thomas
Date: 1/18/2021 10:50:00 AM
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Ideals always have. Good one Rob!
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Poesy Relish
Date: 12/23/2015 11:42:00 AM
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well penned... this poems shows how few words can speak a lot ... nad
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Neelamani Sutar
Date: 11/24/2015 12:27:00 PM
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awesome!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/11/2015 4:38:00 AM
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wonderfully penned...
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 11/10/2015 3:17:00 PM
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Good read!! Your poetry leaves me wanting more!
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Julia Ward
Date: 4/12/2015 3:23:00 PM
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A philosophical tanka. Well done, Rob! Julia, :)
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John Matthews
Date: 4/9/2015 10:06:00 AM
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thanks for the placing in your contest and I like this poem a lot john matthews
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Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2015 1:04:00 PM
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Rob, and excellent tanka poem for the contest, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in. . .
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Rob Carmack
Date: 3/30/2015 10:44:00 AM
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I want to thank all of you that took the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/28/2015 10:47:00 PM
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I see you got a lot of great comments despite me not placing this one. the idea behind it is excellent!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 3/30/2015 10:42:00 AM
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TY Andrea. Hey, I have another excellent idea. How about this; the great people below could be your advisors in your future contests? :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/28/2015 3:12:00 PM
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Excellent Tanka, few can execute them this well.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2015 3:16:00 PM
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Enjoyed reading this one today..Well thought out idea..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/9/2015 10:00:00 AM
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Lines three and four, particularly- terrific. What a great piece. Good luck in the comp. Mister Viv. Oh, and a #7 from me.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/9/2015 1:25:00 AM
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A wonderful entry for Andrea's contest Rob. I hope to see this on her winner's list.
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