Rob Carmack Poet Senryu

Oh God

From sinning lovers
screaming out his holy name
clever deceiver         


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Written: 07.08.15


Current Contest: Senryu on Mind
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas


1st Contest: Senryu
Sponsor: Mike Talbot

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Kim Rodrigues March 12, 2021 at 4:00 PM This says much, indeed! Rob Carmack March 12, 2021 at 9:25 PM Thanks for reading Kim.

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2019 at 2:49 PM Coming back to an oldie but goodie to say thanks for my placement in your last contest. I hope you are feeling better and better in this new year.

Susan Gentry August 6, 2018 at 5:51 PM Back to congratulate you again for your win again!

Eve Roper August 5, 2018 at 2:00 PM Rob, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Mark Toney August 4, 2018 at 4:15 PM Congratulations on your win, Rob. Important point made :)

Line Gauthier August 3, 2018 at 11:54 PM Good one, Rob. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2018 at 3:28 PM I think this one deserved a better placement, Rob. I have just read the entire winners' list pretty much. I really do hate when people use God's name in vain!! Anyway, seeing it on the winners' list gave me a chance to come and say hi to you!!

Susan Gentry February 18, 2018 at 11:44 PM Excellent Senryu!

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2016 at 3:04 PM came here to say thanks for your reading my shore line poem. It was a true story with a few embellished details. What most do not realize is that my dad is a shizophrenic. So that was his life, and my mom left him about a year after that shore scene. Rob Carmack March 20, 2016 at 3:23 PM It must have been difficult for you and your family. Schizophrenia is tough and back then, the medications were not as advanced. You are welcome concerning the reading and congrats to you again for your win in the contest.

Funom Makama February 3, 2016 at 10:25 AM Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7 Rob Carmack March 20, 2016 at 3:34 PM Thank You Funom.

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 11:28 AM soupmail for ya

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2015 at 10:59 PM and congrats for YOUR win HERE, Rob. It was a really good one. TOday I laid out and wrote more haiku and limericks for a few contests. Such a nice way to spend the day! How was your day?

Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2015 at 1:44 AM Rob, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A July 14, 2015 at 12:09 AM Rob, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Viv Wigley July 13, 2015 at 10:40 PM Very clever, Rob. Congrats amd well done. Viv

Jan Allison July 13, 2015 at 12:42 PM Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez July 13, 2015 at 12:36 PM :-))) You certainly don't need a pulpit there. Now this is the kind that should be included in the reading list of future college students, and not just because there's so much going on there. Congrats by the way. :-)

Casarah Nance July 13, 2015 at 8:51 AM Ahaha I like it! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2015 at 11:32 PM SNAP! a great slam, Rob. Just fell on this one by looking at the new PM list. I really like it.

Peter Lewis Holmes July 8, 2015 at 4:12 AM Brilliant Rob!...Peter

Jan Allison July 8, 2015 at 4:04 AM short and sweet and very clever Rob good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx