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OH GOD

From sinning lovers
screaming out his holy name
clever deceiver         

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Contest: Senryu
Sponsor: Mike Talbot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/3/2019 2:49:00 PM
Coming back to an oldie but goodie to say thanks for my placement in your last contest. I hope you are feeling better and better in this new year.
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Date: 8/6/2018 5:51:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again!
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Date: 8/5/2018 2:00:00 PM
Rob, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2018 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rob. Important point made :)
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Date: 8/3/2018 11:54:00 PM
Good one, Rob. Congrats.
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Date: 8/3/2018 3:28:00 PM
I think this one deserved a better placement, Rob. I have just read the entire winners' list pretty much. I really do hate when people use God's name in vain!! Anyway, seeing it on the winners' list gave me a chance to come and say hi to you!!
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:44:00 PM
Excellent Senryu!
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Date: 3/20/2016 3:04:00 PM
came here to say thanks for your reading my shore line poem. It was a true story with a few embellished details. What most do not realize is that my dad is a shizophrenic. So that was his life, and my mom left him about a year after that shore scene.
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Date: 3/20/2016 3:23:00 PM
It must have been difficult for you and your family. Schizophrenia is tough and back then, the medications were not as advanced. You are welcome concerning the reading and congrats to you again for your win in the contest.
Date: 2/3/2016 10:25:00 AM
Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7
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rob carmack
Date: 3/20/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thank You Funom.
Date: 8/19/2015 11:28:00 AM
soupmail for ya
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:52:00 PM
Rob.. An amazing write and an enjoyable evening read!
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:59:00 PM
and congrats for YOUR win HERE, Rob. It was a really good one. TOday I laid out and wrote more haiku and limericks for a few contests. Such a nice way to spend the day! How was your day?
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Date: 7/15/2015 1:44:00 AM
Rob, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:09:00 AM
Rob, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 10:40:00 PM
Very clever, Rob. Congrats amd well done. Viv
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:42:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:36:00 PM
:-))) You certainly don't need a pulpit there. Now this is the kind that should be included in the reading list of future college students, and not just because there's so much going on there. Congrats by the way. :-)
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Date: 7/13/2015 8:51:00 AM
Ahaha I like it! :)
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Date: 7/10/2015 11:32:00 PM
SNAP! a great slam, Rob. Just fell on this one by looking at the new PM list. I really like it.
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Date: 7/8/2015 4:12:00 AM
Brilliant Rob!...Peter
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Date: 7/8/2015 4:04:00 AM
short and sweet and very clever Rob good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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