Oh God

From sinning lovers
screaming out his holy name
clever deceiver         


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Written: 07.08.15


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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2021 4:00:00 PM

This says much, indeed!

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/12/2021 9:25:00 PM

Thanks for reading Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2019 2:49:00 PM

Coming back to an oldie but goodie to say thanks for my placement in your last contest. I hope you are feeling better and better in this new year.

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 5:51:00 PM

Back to congratulate you again for your win again!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/5/2018 2:00:00 PM

Rob, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Mark Toney

Date: 8/4/2018 4:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Rob. Important point made :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/3/2018 11:54:00 PM

Good one, Rob. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 3:28:00 PM

I think this one deserved a better placement, Rob. I have just read the entire winners' list pretty much. I really do hate when people use God's name in vain!! Anyway, seeing it on the winners' list gave me a chance to come and say hi to you!!

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/18/2018 11:44:00 PM

Excellent Senryu!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2016 3:04:00 PM

came here to say thanks for your reading my shore line poem. It was a true story with a few embellished details. What most do not realize is that my dad is a shizophrenic. So that was his life, and my mom left him about a year after that shore scene.

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/20/2016 3:23:00 PM

It must have been difficult for you and your family. Schizophrenia is tough and back then, the medications were not as advanced. You are welcome concerning the reading and congrats to you again for your win in the contest.

Funom Makama

Date: 2/3/2016 10:25:00 AM

Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/20/2016 3:34:00 PM

Thank You Funom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2015 11:28:00 AM

soupmail for ya

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 10:59:00 PM

and congrats for YOUR win HERE, Rob. It was a really good one. TOday I laid out and wrote more haiku and limericks for a few contests. Such a nice way to spend the day! How was your day?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 1:44:00 AM

Rob, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 12:09:00 AM

Rob, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/13/2015 10:40:00 PM

Very clever, Rob. Congrats amd well done. Viv

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 12:42:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/13/2015 12:36:00 PM

:-))) You certainly don't need a pulpit there. Now this is the kind that should be included in the reading list of future college students, and not just because there's so much going on there. Congrats by the way. :-)