Becoming

From the spoils and tragedies of childhood,
panning virtues out of dispositions.
Impaling self upon the spears of truth,
cuts chains of substances and delusions.

Upon mercy’s door, the forgiving heart,
handles Love with gratitude and prudence.
Walking the gallows when bound to depart,
no more illusions when choosing masters.

Respect no longer collecting trophies,
Wars and peace only with integrity.
Essence lives in speech without utterance,
Pride under shovelfuls of honesty.

Closing the chapters when life deems it so.
Strong days testing the brave to deliver,
even when to the ones loved, it is no.
Broken but still, in those times forsaken.

An ear towards the counsel of the wise.
Wooed by the songs of a revolution,
prunes the soul of what is left, harnessed fears,
in diaries of this evolution.

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Date: 5/14/2019 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Rob, blessings are always appreciated.
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Date: 5/13/2019 3:58:00 PM
Congrats on garnering a third place this time, Rob.
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Date: 5/13/2019 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Rob. I love the metaphors in several of your lines. : )
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Date: 5/12/2019 9:30:00 AM
Be sure to let Andrea Know you have one another contest with this fine piece. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/12/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thank You Richard. God Bless you and your family.
Date: 4/10/2016 8:59:00 PM
Rob, since it is always hard for me to find things of yours to see, and I WANT to find things, please let me know if you ever win contests with your older poems. I would love to read them again and give you congrats! thanks for taking time to see mine today.
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:23:00 PM
So many memorable lines here, Rob.."Essence lives in speech without utterance, Pride under shovelfuls of honesty." Beautiful wisdom and well said... and, "Essence lives in speech without utterance" That is an awesome line! Amazing composition. Thanks for sharing! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/1/2016 8:03:00 AM
Great poetic expressions enveloping mind blowing lines. You've maintained your standard of impressing sound minds and I am definitely one of those you've wowed. Great work friend
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Date: 12/29/2015 2:52:00 PM
Wonderful phrasing, strong and colorful. Your vocabulary is prodigious and indicates a full and extensive education. An English major with sides of philosophy and psychology I would guess... Full marks my friend. Best wishes, Keith
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Rob Carmack
Date: 12/29/2015 11:48:00 PM
Ah Keith, good insight. I was a double major, Psychology and Philosophy. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/19/2015 4:18:00 PM
Rob, I think I have seen all your poetry. Please let me know if I have missed anything , will you? I was so busy between church and my contest this morning, I can barely catch up with other stuff this afternoon! (even getting to hotmail.)
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:16:00 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
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Date: 5/13/2015 9:51:00 PM
YES !! Definitely a poem written for the intelligent mature mind. Very well written !! You have a talent in mixing words. Loprunes the soul of what is left, harnessed fears, in diaries of this evolution. Love this last line.. "Wooed by the songs of a revolution, prunes the soul of what is left, harnessed fears, in diaries of this evolution." Very cool :) xx~xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/13/2015 10:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Kim for reading and the compliments. Hugs.
Date: 5/10/2015 5:32:00 PM
a very powerful insightful write
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:09:00 PM
Rob, congrats on your win with this wondrous write, so many great words and lines within, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, springtime flowers
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:59:00 AM
Growing up forces us to encounter many challenges. Some people mature more quickly due to circumstances and encounters. "Collecting trophies" seems to be more of a male pursuit, but I really like that verse. I haven't read the rules for this contest, but you have keen insight that is well expressed here. Wishing you success, and thanks for stopping by. Carolyn
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:06:00 PM
formidable work from your golden quill, rob.. sweet congrats all the way!... huggs
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/3/2015 3:15:00 PM
Thank you for reading & your compliment, hugs back to you.
Date: 5/1/2015 11:08:00 PM
I thought I would click on one of your recent poems I had not seen yet and wow, I see you got a win with Flo. A huge accomplishment, Rob, Congratulations. A very deep thinking poem.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/3/2015 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 4/30/2015 7:51:00 PM
ROB, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/3/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/30/2015 10:59:00 AM
Congrats to your WIN Rob!!!!! ;-)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/3/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Teddy.
Date: 4/29/2015 9:42:00 PM
Rob, I was about to post on your blog in appreciation of having placed in your DREAMS contest. I deemed it best to do it here, in your own page. Thank you for hosting the contest and for the inspiration. Hope you will continue to sponsor contests in the future. Wishing you the best. Kim :))
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/29/2015 11:34:00 PM
You are welcome and I hope you will continue to enter.
Date: 4/29/2015 8:27:00 PM
Rob, a wonderful and powerful 7, congrats on your placement and thanks for visiting my poem, turn it off
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/29/2015 11:35:00 PM
Thanks for the comment and the 7.
Date: 4/29/2015 9:30:00 AM
Didn't get to see this before the result was announced but yes, I can see why this was chosen. Wisdom and poetry do go together. Congratulations and all the best, Rob. Kim :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/29/2015 11:38:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 4/29/2015 5:51:00 AM
Very wise words indeed Rob:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/29/2015 11:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. Hugs, Rob.
Date: 4/28/2015 3:01:00 PM
There is such wisdom speaking in every stanza....cutting our own delusions! Integrity and honesty, test us over and over, until we truly appreciate the value of what it means to be adult! Well said, Rob! Congratulations!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/28/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Carrie.
Date: 4/28/2015 2:57:00 PM
amazing win... LINDA
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/28/2015 4:04:00 PM
Thanx Linda.
Date: 4/27/2015 9:24:00 PM
The truths of life are hard to hear, but it is part of growing up and learning to accept what life really is... These are quite powerful words of wisdom. Excellent writing, Rob! Good luck in F.J.'s contest!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/28/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Kelly.
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