Becoming

From the spoils and tragedies of childhood,
panning virtues out of dispositions.
Impaling self upon the spears of truth,
cuts chains of substances and delusions.

Upon mercy’s door, the forgiving heart,
handles Love with gratitude and prudence.
Walking the gallows when bound to depart,
no more illusions when choosing masters.

Respect no longer collecting trophies,
Wars and peace only with integrity.
Essence lives in speech without utterance,
Pride under shovelfuls of honesty.

Closing the chapters when life deems it so.
Strong days testing the brave to deliver,
even when to the ones loved, it is no.
Broken but still, in those times forsaken.

An ear towards the counsel of the wise.
Wooed by the songs of a revolution,
prunes the soul of what is left, harnessed fears,
in diaries of this evolution.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 29, 2026 at 1:26 PM
An honest reflection of your life, showcasing the ups and downs of your life... The poem rhymes and flows really well.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
Carmack Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:28 PM
Thank You S1. I appreciate the opportunity and the placement.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Rob, blessings are always appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Congrats on garnering a third place this time, Rob.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Rob. I love the metaphors in several of your lines. : )
Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Be sure to let Andrea Know you have one another contest with this fine piece. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Carmack Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Thank You Richard. God Bless you and your family.
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Rob, since it is always hard for me to find things of yours to see, and I WANT to find things, please let me know if you ever win contests with your older poems. I would love to read them again and give you congrats! thanks for taking time to see mine today.
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March 17, 2016 at 11:23 PM
So many memorable lines here, Rob.."Essence lives in speech without utterance, Pride under shovelfuls of honesty." Beautiful wisdom and well said... and, "Essence lives in speech without utterance" That is an awesome line! Amazing composition. Thanks for sharing! Always, Laura
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Great poetic expressions enveloping mind blowing lines. You've maintained your standard of impressing sound minds and I am definitely one of those you've wowed. Great work friend
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December 29, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Wonderful phrasing, strong and colorful. Your vocabulary is prodigious and indicates a full and extensive education. An English major with sides of philosophy and psychology I would guess... Full marks my friend. Best wishes, Keith
Carmack Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Ah Keith, good insight. I was a double major, Psychology and Philosophy. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Rob, I think I have seen all your poetry. Please let me know if I have missed anything , will you? I was so busy between church and my contest this morning, I can barely catch up with other stuff this afternoon! (even getting to hotmail.)
Makama Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 3:16 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
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May 13, 2015 at 9:51 PM
YES !! Definitely a poem written for the intelligent mature mind. Very well written !! You have a talent in mixing words. Loprunes the soul of what is left, harnessed fears, in diaries of this evolution. Love this last line.. "Wooed by the songs of a revolution, prunes the soul of what is left, harnessed fears, in diaries of this evolution." Very cool :) xx~xx
Carmack Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Thank you very much Kim for reading and the compliments. Hugs.
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 5:32 PM
a very powerful insightful write
La France Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Rob, congrats on your win with this wondrous write, so many great words and lines within, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, springtime flowers
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May 5, 2015 at 5:59 AM
Growing up forces us to encounter many challenges. Some people mature more quickly due to circumstances and encounters. "Collecting trophies" seems to be more of a male pursuit, but I really like that verse. I haven't read the rules for this contest, but you have keen insight that is well expressed here. Wishing you success, and thanks for stopping by. Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 2:06 PM
formidable work from your golden quill, rob.. sweet congrats all the way!... huggs
Carmack Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you for reading & your compliment, hugs back to you.
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 11:08 PM
I thought I would click on one of your recent poems I had not seen yet and wow, I see you got a win with Flo. A huge accomplishment, Rob, Congratulations. A very deep thinking poem.
Carmack Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Andrea.
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:51 PM
ROB, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Carmack Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Thank you.
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Congrats to your WIN Rob!!!!! ;-)
Carmack Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Teddy.
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April 29, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Rob, I was about to post on your blog in appreciation of having placed in your DREAMS contest. I deemed it best to do it here, in your own page. Thank you for hosting the contest and for the inspiration. Hope you will continue to sponsor contests in the future. Wishing you the best. Kim :))
Carmack Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 11:34 PM
You are welcome and I hope you will continue to enter.
La France Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Rob, a wonderful and powerful 7, congrats on your placement and thanks for visiting my poem, turn it off
Carmack Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 11:35 PM
Thanks for the comment and the 7.
Nunez Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Didn't get to see this before the result was announced but yes, I can see why this was chosen. Wisdom and poetry do go together. Congratulations and all the best, Rob. Kim :)
Carmack Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Thanks.
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Very wise words indeed Rob:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Carmack Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Thank you very much Jan. Hugs, Rob.
Richards Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 3:01 PM
There is such wisdom speaking in every stanza....cutting our own delusions! Integrity and honesty, test us over and over, until we truly appreciate the value of what it means to be adult! Well said, Rob! Congratulations!
Carmack Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Carrie.
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April 28, 2015 at 2:57 PM
amazing win... LINDA
Carmack Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Thanx Linda.
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