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FLAMENCO IN SEVILLA



Sevilla, the evening pins flowers on your hair
A pirouette of tasselled gown rustles by
Igniting a lusty swirl along theater’s wing,
Over spotlights on red liquefied hips
That kiss of flamenco gyres into a dance ;
Relishing the wine which drips as you lift
And tap those feet through moonshine’s gloam:
O, such swaggers devour my senses
While Latin music sets the castanets ablaze--
Then a pause, a sensuous movement, jigging.

Sevilla, you are a luscious pageant of a song,
A brief canticle gliding on my bones, that I
Fondle you in the dark    caressing scented nape:
What endless thrill you bring on an August dusk!
Then together drunken madly ,   recklessly 
I will be  love's sunrise, and you my finale's art,
As  this heart etches a twirl in flamenco sighs,
Clinging to each refrain of such possessed trance.



For Silent One's Contest:
Poems That Paint a Picture-3    9/24/2017
~ a most memorable dinner in Sevilla
watching a Flamenco concert~





Copyright © nette onclaud | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Date: 9/26/2017 7:32:00 AM

    Lovely imagery as always Nette..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
  1. Date: 9/26/2017 7:19:00 AM

    There are some who think in poetry, true poets they are, and you are up there with the best Nette. I love the scene you paint with your words. Brilliant as always...Maria xx
  1. Date: 9/26/2017 7:09:00 AM

    Congrats nette!
  1. Date: 9/25/2017 11:25:00 AM

    Beautifully portrayed my friend...as always your words smooth as silk...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
  1. Date: 9/25/2017 2:01:00 AM

    Wow! Such lovely words drip from your pen mesmerising me, Nette:)
  1. Date: 9/25/2017 1:51:00 AM

    - To me it sounds like a beautiful dream - Excellent for the contest image, Nette :) -   Good luck - Best wishes for a lovely new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 11:18:00 PM

    Stunningly sensual images ... wonderful ... good luck with the contest...
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 6:37:00 PM

    Your poem oozes sensuality Nette. Ablaze with lustrous imagery. Very seductive indeed. Good luck in the contest!
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 4:24:00 PM

    Stunning imagery and sensuality Nette, who needs a picture, you painted the scene so well with your words, should do very well in the contest!
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 2:39:00 PM

    Delightful music and beauty flow from this Flamenco offering, Nette. Body movements and footwork are very much in evidence. The second stanza enthralls with sensuality. If the sponsor asked for a painted picture he needs look no further! Hugs // paul
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 1:53:00 PM

    The power of this work lies in its subliminal seduction-- a swagger here and drunkenness there. Exceptional!
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 10:54:00 AM

    This was good. I enjoyed it...It's also my dream to go to Andalucia...to learn Flamenco guitar...Have a lovely day
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 10:33:00 AM

    You put me in a trance with your delicious flamenco. Beautiful. Good luck with the contest.
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 9:31:00 AM

    A lovely write, Nette! Beautifully descriptive and atmospheric! I have visited Spain several times, but I have never been to Sevilla.
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 8:13:00 AM

    This is beautifully written Nette. Good luck in the contest ! :)
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 7:26:00 AM

    Beautiful rhythm and dance--lovey lyrics--so well written and executed--romantic and poetic, nette!
  1. Date: 9/24/2017 7:15:00 AM

    Wow, Wow, Wow! Nette, you have surely written such a stupendous write here! I'm in awe of this stunning and spectacularly superior poem! I truly loved reading this awesome piece this morning! What a delicate and softly sensual piece, filled with fire of the essence of a magnificent dance! Great Work!!

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