Winter Magic

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Written: 01.08.24
Contest: Winter Magic
Host: Tania Kitchin

Childhoods defended with the snowball, God's annual medium preserved the young artist's angel fall, but man had to make himself served. The grass still green in January and the bush is still with berry. Professor Hinkle's global plans in all and what to engineer the sleight of billions of hands that has made you disappear.

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 6:13:00 AM

Rob, a creative winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/15/2024 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Tania.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2024 1:11:00 PM

I feel stupid not knowing who hinkle is. this is a very creative approach to the contest. Like jan, I am happy to see you here

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/11/2024 4:59:00 PM

Hey Andrea. Professor Hinkle is the villian in the 1969 Christmas television special 'Frosty the Snowman'. TY for reading and commenting. It is good to be back.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/9/2024 9:36:00 AM

What a unique take on Winter magic Rob!!, it is SO good to see you back on the site. Some things have changed since you were here last and you need to remove the date contest details etc from the bottom of the poem - just put them in the poet's notes section. hugs jan xx

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/9/2024 4:35:00 PM

Thanks Jan.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/9/2024 9:18:00 AM

Nice entry for the contest, Rob. Nice to see you back, My friend. Happy New Year! Best wishes in the contest.. Charlie

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/9/2024 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Charles, it is good to be back. Happy New Year to you and your family.

Lin Lane

Date: 1/8/2024 1:43:00 PM

Oh No... not Professor Hinkle! Hang on to your hat, Frosty! It's SO nice to see a post from you, Rob.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/9/2024 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Lin. Been a while since I wrote a poem, but saw the contest and was inspired.