Of Loss

Forever’s gift will always bind to chance.
Just down the street extends around the world,
corruption’s stain on every circumstance.
Our coffins – shingles of the underworld.

Another child left frozen, tucked in time.
The future’s orphan trapped within their grief,
of life and lives denied the peace and rhyme
demands to question every held belief.

To choose to trust a promise we all know.
When everything fails you, rocks crushed to sand,
most noble prayer, the answer is still no.
Remember Job and Christ’s pierced loving hand.

A touch of solace which he said and gave,
a heaven’s childhood from an earthly grave.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/8/2025 2:28:00 AM
A broken trust is hard to accept, people can be unpredictable at times, as Mark said, there's only you can really trust. A well written sonnet Rob, I do find the sonnet form tricky. Congratulations on your win. Tom
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/8/2025 6:31:00 PM
TY Tom.
Date: 1/7/2025 2:01:00 PM
Rob, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this expressive, realistic, reverent poem. Janice
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/8/2025 6:31:00 PM
TY Janice.
Date: 1/6/2025 3:38:00 PM
A poignant write, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/8/2025 6:30:00 PM
Thank you for hosting and the placement.
Date: 1/6/2025 3:24:00 PM
What a great poem ! Congratulations on your win.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/8/2025 6:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/30/2020 2:50:00 PM
The only thing that will get us through is trust in him. What a great work of art my friend!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 8/9/2020 8:00:00 PM
TY buddy.
Date: 2/10/2019 8:48:00 AM
Yet again I find your sonnet to be a gem, an expression of light and truth wrapping a clear and important message delivered. Magnificent flow and inspired verses to gift the reader much more than just the pleasure of reading great verse. Gift them Light, Love, Wisdom and Promise.. A fav, a glowing gem..
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/10/2019 11:09:00 AM
The Shakespearean sonnet is one of my favorite forms. Thanks for the fav and for commenting.
Date: 2/7/2019 11:44:00 AM
Concluding lines to touch core of heart. Best Wishes.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/8/2019 9:07:00 PM
Thank you for reading & commenting Anisha.
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