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A Pond’s Melody

into melody jumps the frog beyond the reel slow dragonflies goosed and ducked a lit symphony campfires dance like sun and moon in ripples of stone and wind ---------------------------- Contest:Show me a Choka Sponsor:Nette Onclaud Written:06.08.25

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/20/2025 4:42:00 PM

The frog jumps and the dragonflies goosed and ducked. :) Sounds like they're having fun. This is cute, creative and clever. The melody lingers on. My best to you, Rob. :) Hugs, Brandy

Rob Carmack
Date: 7/21/2025 2:11:00 PM

Thanks with a hug back to you.

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2025 6:48:00 PM

Oh, this is enchanting my dear poet friend! I love it! Big warm Congrats on your win too! Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/15/2025 2:57:00 PM

You're welcome and thanks for your visit. God bless you and your family. A halo of hugs back you.

Valsa George

Date: 6/11/2025 9:36:00 PM

Your depiction of life and sounds in and around the pool is captivating. Congratulations on your win, dear Rob.

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/15/2025 2:56:00 PM

Thank you Valsa.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2025 1:11:00 PM

Parts of this I really love for the imagery, Rob. Congrats for your win.

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/15/2025 2:55:00 PM

Thank you!

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/11/2025 8:35:00 AM

Rob, Sorry for the delay in responding to your notification on my entry. First and foremost a genuine gratitude is your due for your generous comment on my piece. But being a judge can be onerous and I value all placements. Your entry is breathtaking in its sweep, vision and detail. I imagined myself at the scene of composition Well done Howard

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/11/2025 9:42:00 AM

Thank you Howard. I too value all placements and am grateful for mine in this contest.