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Seeing Autumn's Oak Adorn

Painting sky before I was born,
Draping my grave in leaf and acorn.

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Contest: Crystalline
Sponsor: Rick Parise
11.22.14

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Mick Talbot

Date: 12/2/2017 12:04:00 AM

Very profound! :0)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/22/2017 8:41:00 PM

What an absolutely divine poem - beautiful form. It's a fave for me.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/7/2017 8:16:00 AM

succinct and thought provoking, great write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2016 8:23:00 PM

Rob, I don't know why I never faved this one,but I am gonna do it now. It is short, which I love, and the meaning is awesome. Thanks for visiting my work today Hope you are having a good day. I am finally almost caught up here and want to do a contest. By the way , you should do a family haiku set for Marvin. I want to learn about your family

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2016 5:22:00 PM

Here is an oldie of yours that is said to be your BEST one. I really liked it too!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/1/2016 6:53:00 PM

Yep, the trees will be here long after we're gone. Well done Rob! Best wishes, Keith

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/11/2015 5:14:00 AM

Draping in the winter list as leaf and acorn. Interest poem my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 11/11/2015 4:37:00 AM

wow.what a profound message..7

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/10/2015 11:30:00 PM

Love it ,,,, 7 for sure :)

Umar Kakamu Aliyu

Date: 11/10/2015 5:05:00 PM

Well combination, well sound, less life. A wonderful poem

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/10/2015 2:34:00 PM

Interesting read, visually appealing!!!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 10/28/2015 10:52:00 AM

good one rob :) god bless..

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 10/28/2015 4:21:00 AM

So much philosophy and creativity in few words,beautiful indeed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2015 5:07:00 PM

Looking at this one again, I'd say it is one of your best! (and I see congrats were in order!!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 8:23:00 PM

I don't see replies to me on poems but am seeing this one now, and I agree with you. They are a very fun form to do.

Faye Gibson

Date: 11/28/2014 9:40:00 AM

So lovely, Rob. Congratulations on your win.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 11/25/2014 4:42:00 AM

Sobresaliente! i love profundity in your words! Congratulations!

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/26/2014 8:15:00 AM

Thank You.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2014 1:18:00 PM

I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/25/2014 12:09:00 AM

Thank You Sara.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/24/2014 10:37:00 AM

Amazingly deep thoughts have created this brilliant Crystalline. Congratulations on your great win.

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thanks Brenda.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/24/2014 10:27:00 AM

WOW, an incredible crystalline, Rob! Congrats to you!! :))

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 11:37:00 AM

Thanks, there were so many good entries.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/24/2014 9:52:00 AM

a lyrical read, rob...worthy of win ; sweet congrats

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Nette. I am enjoying these short forms.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/24/2014 7:43:00 AM

Brilliant write Rob, Congratulations on your well deserved win. Fav.

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 9:05:00 AM

TY, and thanks for the Fav.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2014 10:14:00 PM

another really good one I had not seen before. I just LOVE these!!! Congrats on your fine win.

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 9:05:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. These are fun to write.

David Mohn

Date: 11/23/2014 8:26:00 PM

Great writing Rob...big congrats

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 9:06:00 AM

TY.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/23/2014 7:09:00 PM

Very deep meaning for such a short write my friend, and the best part of the whole thing is you nailed it so well, bravo great here, Rob, glad you enjoyed my fall poem appreciated your comment, cheri

Rob Carmack
Date: 11/24/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thank you and that fall poem of yours, I love it.

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