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Seeing Autumn's Oak Adorn

Painting sky before I was born,
Draping my grave in leaf and acorn.

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Contest: Crystalline
Sponsor: Rick Parise
11.22.14

Copyright © Rob Carmack | Year Posted 2014

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Mick Talbot Date: 12/2/2017 12:04:00 AM Very profound! :0) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 11/22/2017 8:41:00 PM What an absolutely divine poem - beautiful form. It's a fave for me. Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 6/7/2017 8:16:00 AM succinct and thought provoking, great write. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2016 8:23:00 PM Rob, I don't know why I never faved this one,but I am gonna do it now. It is short, which I love, and the meaning is awesome. Thanks for visiting my work today Hope you are having a good day. I am finally almost caught up here and want to do a contest. By the way , you should do a family haiku set for Marvin. I want to learn about your family Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/12/2016 5:22:00 PM Here is an oldie of yours that is said to be your BEST one. I really liked it too!!! Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/1/2016 6:53:00 PM Yep, the trees will be here long after we're gone. Well done Rob! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 11/11/2015 5:14:00 AM Draping in the winter list as leaf and acorn. Interest poem my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/11/2015 4:37:00 AM wow.what a profound message..7 Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/10/2015 11:30:00 PM Love it ,,,, 7 for sure :) Login to Reply

Umar Kakamu Aliyu Date: 11/10/2015 5:05:00 PM Well combination, well sound, less life. A wonderful poem Login to Reply

Sarita Milliner Date: 11/10/2015 2:34:00 PM Interesting read, visually appealing!!! Login to Reply

Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/28/2015 10:52:00 AM good one rob :) god bless.. Login to Reply

Rizwana Bhurani Date: 10/28/2015 4:21:00 AM So much philosophy and creativity in few words,beautiful indeed. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/3/2015 5:07:00 PM Looking at this one again, I'd say it is one of your best! (and I see congrats were in order!!) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/2/2015 8:23:00 PM I don't see replies to me on poems but am seeing this one now, and I agree with you. They are a very fun form to do. Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 11/28/2014 9:40:00 AM So lovely, Rob. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Hija De La Luna Date: 11/25/2014 4:42:00 AM Sobresaliente! i love profundity in your words! Congratulations! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/26/2014 8:15:00 AM Thank You.

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/24/2014 1:18:00 PM I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/25/2014 12:09:00 AM Thank You Sara.

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 10:37:00 AM Amazingly deep thoughts have created this brilliant Crystalline. Congratulations on your great win. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 11:36:00 AM Thanks Brenda.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/24/2014 10:27:00 AM WOW, an incredible crystalline, Rob! Congrats to you!! :)) Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 11:37:00 AM Thanks, there were so many good entries.

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/24/2014 9:52:00 AM a lyrical read, rob...worthy of win ; sweet congrats Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 11:39:00 AM Thanks Nette. I am enjoying these short forms.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/24/2014 7:43:00 AM Brilliant write Rob, Congratulations on your well deserved win. Fav. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 9:05:00 AM TY, and thanks for the Fav.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/23/2014 10:14:00 PM another really good one I had not seen before. I just LOVE these!!! Congrats on your fine win. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 9:05:00 AM Thanks Andrea. These are fun to write.

David Mohn Date: 11/23/2014 8:26:00 PM Great writing Rob...big congrats Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 9:06:00 AM TY.

Cherl Dunn Date: 11/23/2014 7:09:00 PM Very deep meaning for such a short write my friend, and the best part of the whole thing is you nailed it so well, bravo great here, Rob, glad you enjoyed my fall poem appreciated your comment, cheri Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 9:03:00 AM Thank you and that fall poem of yours, I love it.

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