Touch

Tomorrow’s dreams beneath my pillow sit Orchestral prayers unwind the years ago Uncovered only one way back to you Conviction drew your soul’s celestial arc His light still shines upon a narrow path ----------------------------------------------------- Written: 06.26.17 Contest: Another 2017 Stunner Sponsor: Line Gauthier Previous NA in "Any Poem That Got NA'd in June-July 2017" contest. Previous NA in "Touch Me With Words" contest.

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 8/26/2024 4:08:00 PM

Beautiful acrostic. Congrats on your win, Rob!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/5/2018 10:27:00 PM

"Uncovered only one way back to you" Such a dreamy thought. This is beautiful, and your words touch my heart. I see that you have won in a contest. Congratulations. ~ Brandy

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/19/2018 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/19/2018 5:20:00 PM

Thanks for entering my contest, Rob, with this very short mirror acrostic poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2018 6:03:00 PM

back AGAIN!! Just to say hi!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2017 5:49:00 PM

Hiya, Rob, gotta see more poetry from you, my friend.

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/4/2017 8:58:00 AM

a double acrostic! Very cool!

Silent One

Date: 9/13/2017 7:07:00 AM

I was searching for you the other day, but could not find you.. hope all is well..

Rob Carmack
Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM

All is busy, but well. TY S1 and glad to see you back.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/11/2017 7:41:00 AM

Brilliant,clever write. A pleasure to read. Best of luck in the contest.

Rob Carmack
Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM

TY Scott.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/10/2017 2:23:00 AM

A double acrostic isn't easy to pull of. You've done it well. I especially like line that very first line. Magic

Rob Carmack
Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM

TY Eileen.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2017 9:18:00 PM

Seeing again, This one so creative with the double acrostic done on it, Rob. Thanks for coming to my poem today! I did not have time for all the comments I owed. I need to get off now. Wish me luck tomorrow. At least I have it off!!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/29/2017 1:19:00 PM

Beautiful and so inspiring... This was very, very well written, Rob... Good luck to you in the contest!

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/30/2017 7:10:00 PM

It did not place in the first contest, but I just found another to enter. Thank you for reading & commenting. God bless you Kelly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2017 7:47:00 PM

Just now seeing your reply to me on this one. I hope you liked my Rio poem. I sure did love my vacation to that city!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2017 6:50:00 PM

wow, a double one!! You get extra points for THAT, my friend. I'll miss you when I leave for vacay, but maybe I will be able to use my sister's computer!

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/29/2017 8:35:00 AM

I'll miss you too. I hope you have a great time. Thanks for reading & commenting.