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Tomorrow’s dreams beneath my pillow sit
Orchestral prayers unwind the years ago
Uncovered only one way back to you
Conviction drew your soul’s celestial arc
His light still shines upon a narrow path

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Written: 06.26.17
Contest: Another 2017 Stunner
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Previous NA in "Any Poem That Got NA'd in June-July 2017" contest.
Previous NA in "Touch Me With Words" contest.

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Franci Hoffman Date: 8/26/2024 4:08:00 PM Beautiful acrostic. Congrats on your win, Rob! Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 7/5/2018 10:27:00 PM "Uncovered only one way back to you" Such a dreamy thought. This is beautiful, and your words touch my heart. I see that you have won in a contest. Congratulations. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 4/19/2018 10:04:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/19/2018 5:20:00 PM Thanks for entering my contest, Rob, with this very short mirror acrostic poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/15/2018 6:03:00 PM back AGAIN!! Just to say hi! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/14/2017 5:49:00 PM Hiya, Rob, gotta see more poetry from you, my friend. Login to Reply

Becca Teagan Date: 10/4/2017 8:58:00 AM a double acrostic! Very cool! Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 9/13/2017 7:07:00 AM I was searching for you the other day, but could not find you.. hope all is well.. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM All is busy, but well. TY S1 and glad to see you back.

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 9/11/2017 7:41:00 AM Brilliant,clever write. A pleasure to read. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM TY Scott.

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/10/2017 2:23:00 AM A double acrostic isn't easy to pull of. You've done it well. I especially like line that very first line. Magic Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM TY Eileen.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/3/2017 9:18:00 PM Seeing again, This one so creative with the double acrostic done on it, Rob. Thanks for coming to my poem today! I did not have time for all the comments I owed. I need to get off now. Wish me luck tomorrow. At least I have it off!! Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 8/29/2017 1:19:00 PM Beautiful and so inspiring... This was very, very well written, Rob... Good luck to you in the contest! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 8/30/2017 7:10:00 PM It did not place in the first contest, but I just found another to enter. Thank you for reading & commenting. God bless you Kelly.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2017 7:47:00 PM Just now seeing your reply to me on this one. I hope you liked my Rio poem. I sure did love my vacation to that city! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/28/2017 6:50:00 PM wow, a double one!! You get extra points for THAT, my friend. I'll miss you when I leave for vacay, but maybe I will be able to use my sister's computer! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/29/2017 8:35:00 AM I'll miss you too. I hope you have a great time. Thanks for reading & commenting.

Alyssa Lorette Date: 6/27/2017 6:30:00 PM Quite unique, I wouldn't have thought to start and end with the same letter. Good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/27/2017 10:29:00 PM Thank you Alyssa.

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/27/2017 1:35:00 AM this is a splendid piece with glowing images, rob.. happy to read you!..huggs Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM Thanks and a hug back.

Phoenix Szentesi Date: 6/26/2017 3:28:00 PM I love how the words start and end with the same letter :) Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM TY Phoenix.

Daniel Turner Date: 6/26/2017 10:48:00 AM Nice double acrostic, Rob. Good luck! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM Thanks Daniel & good luck to you as well.

Paul Callus Date: 6/26/2017 10:09:00 AM This double-acrostic is lovely and creative, Rob! Well done! Regards // paul Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM Thanks Paul.

Jan Allison Date: 6/26/2017 5:55:00 AM VERY cleverly penned Rob I have never tried a double acrostic!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/27/2017 10:31:00 PM Thanx Jan, hugs to you.