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Tomorrow’s dreams beneath my pillow sit Orchestral prayers unwind the years ago Uncovered only one way back to you Conviction drew your soul’s celestial arc His light still shines upon a narrow path ----------------------------------------------------- Written: 06.26.17 Contest: Another 2017 Stunner Sponsor: Line Gauthier Previous NA in "Any Poem That Got NA'd in June-July 2017" contest. Previous NA in "Touch Me With Words" contest.

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Date: 7/5/2018 10:27:00 PM
"Uncovered only one way back to you" Such a dreamy thought. This is beautiful, and your words touch my heart. I see that you have won in a contest. Congratulations. ~ Brandy
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/19/2018 5:20:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Rob, with this very short mirror acrostic poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
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Date: 3/15/2018 6:03:00 PM
back AGAIN!! Just to say hi!
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:49:00 PM
Hiya, Rob, gotta see more poetry from you, my friend.
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:58:00 AM
a double acrostic! Very cool!
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Date: 9/13/2017 7:07:00 AM
I was searching for you the other day, but could not find you.. hope all is well..
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rob carmack
Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM
All is busy, but well. TY S1 and glad to see you back.
Date: 9/11/2017 7:41:00 AM
Brilliant,clever write. A pleasure to read. Best of luck in the contest.
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rob carmack
Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM
TY Scott.
Date: 9/10/2017 2:23:00 AM
A double acrostic isn't easy to pull of. You've done it well. I especially like line that very first line. Magic
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rob carmack
Date: 9/19/2017 5:05:00 AM
TY Eileen.
Date: 9/3/2017 9:18:00 PM
Seeing again, This one so creative with the double acrostic done on it, Rob. Thanks for coming to my poem today! I did not have time for all the comments I owed. I need to get off now. Wish me luck tomorrow. At least I have it off!!
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Date: 8/29/2017 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful and so inspiring... This was very, very well written, Rob... Good luck to you in the contest!
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rob carmack
Date: 8/30/2017 7:10:00 PM
It did not place in the first contest, but I just found another to enter. Thank you for reading & commenting. God bless you Kelly.
Date: 7/23/2017 7:47:00 PM
Just now seeing your reply to me on this one. I hope you liked my Rio poem. I sure did love my vacation to that city!
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Date: 6/28/2017 6:50:00 PM
wow, a double one!! You get extra points for THAT, my friend. I'll miss you when I leave for vacay, but maybe I will be able to use my sister's computer!
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rob carmack
Date: 6/29/2017 8:35:00 AM
I'll miss you too. I hope you have a great time. Thanks for reading & commenting.
Date: 6/27/2017 6:30:00 PM
Quite unique, I wouldn't have thought to start and end with the same letter. Good luck in the contest! :)
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rob carmack
Date: 6/27/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Alyssa.
Date: 6/27/2017 1:35:00 AM
this is a splendid piece with glowing images, rob.. happy to read you!..huggs
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rob carmack
Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM
Thanks and a hug back.
Date: 6/26/2017 3:28:00 PM
I love how the words start and end with the same letter :)
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rob carmack
Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM
TY Phoenix.
Date: 6/26/2017 10:48:00 AM
Nice double acrostic, Rob. Good luck!
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rob carmack
Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM
Thanks Daniel & good luck to you as well.
Date: 6/26/2017 10:09:00 AM
This double-acrostic is lovely and creative, Rob! Well done! Regards // paul
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rob carmack
Date: 6/27/2017 10:30:00 PM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 6/26/2017 5:55:00 AM
VERY cleverly penned Rob I have never tried a double acrostic!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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rob carmack
Date: 6/27/2017 10:31:00 PM
Thanx Jan, hugs to you.