Rob Carmack Poet Crystalline

His Eternal Revenue

Years as paint strokes on canvas you,
and framed into a new star when through.


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Contest:  Any Theme Crystalline
Sponsor: Rick Parise
Written:  11.12.16

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Doug Vinson March 9, 2017 at 9:28 AM Quite a pleasurable two lines to read, Rob. : ) Very well done!

Maurice Yvonne January 31, 2017 at 9:11 AM Wow, you are so good at these restrictive styles. Great lessons for me on how less is more. Just excellent rob. Thank you. Rob Carmack February 4, 2017 at 12:15 AM Thank you Armand and God Bless you.

Nette Onclaud December 22, 2016 at 12:31 PM ohh, this is a moving read, rob.. so glad to see you around.. how our doggie?.. season's best!..huggs Rob Carmack December 22, 2016 at 6:21 PM Boo is doing great, enjoying all the holiday foods. My best and a few dozen hugs to you & Snickers.

Jan Allison December 14, 2016 at 7:28 AM A beautiful crystalline Rob - so lovely to see your avatar on soup ... miss you:-( hugs jan xx Rob Carmack December 22, 2016 at 6:22 PM Hey Jan - wrapping you like a wreath with a big hug. Thanks for for reading & commenting.

Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2016 at 3:28 PM what an awesome message in this one, my friend. Glad that you put up a new one and sorry I missed it earlier. Rob Carmack December 1, 2016 at 4:39 AM Thanks Andrea.

Becca Teagan November 30, 2016 at 2:46 PM hmm... this is interesting! I'll have to look at what Crystalline is ... Rob Carmack December 1, 2016 at 4:39 AM I think it does have 17 syllables, 1st line = 8 and the 2nd line = 9 right? Becca Teagan November 30, 2016 at 4:06 PM regardless, it's a cool poem. Becca Teagan November 30, 2016 at 2:50 PM I looked... isn't it supposed to have 17 syllables?

Arthur Vaso November 13, 2016 at 12:20 AM Liked this, very contemplative for me! Rob Carmack November 14, 2016 at 1:54 AM Thank you Arthur.