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"This soul of mine is in decay, my spirit fading away; this world of mine begins to crumble, and my pen to fumble." And in my meditation I seek my strength, going deep into a dream and distant realm; I see my life through my third eye, oh, the pain that dwells within my heart. And I drift in a clear sea of azure blue, until I hear bells tinkling from afar; an old wrinkled woman is beckoning me, she whispers- this is your destiny. "This soul of mine is in decay, my spirit is fading away; this world of mine begins to crumble, and my pen to fumble." I push the old woman back with my mind. NO! I do not want to just shrivel to ruin; then, I see a beautiful woman dancing, with multi-hued veils twirling, swirling. And I know she is me and it will be, I will find the strength inside of me; will put serenity on my lips- in my heart, will hold acceptance in my hands, then surrender it . . . ____________________ March 10, 2017 Poetry/Carpe Diem/''Surrender It'' Copyright Protected, ID 17- 883-427-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Lyrics III- Dream Theater sponsor, Rob Carmack Sixth Place

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Date: 4/18/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Constance.
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Date: 3/13/2017 1:02:00 AM
A powerful, moving piece. To 'surrender' feels so monumental for to do it...what remains. Your words are deeply felt and eloquently expressed.:-) I love the inner voice and strength the tenderness and fiery spirit. This made me smile, I am cheering for this girl.:-) Beautiful writing:-) a great pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:00:00 AM
This was very deep and beautiful. I enjoyed it greatly.
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