Wind Songs

Ribbed strands of wheat across the plain bend at the knees, to drink the rain in windfalls Brown from harvest, drought and blight, are cornstalks spinning through the night like windmills The dry stalks slant and dangle leaves and rattle music through the trees in windstorms
__________________________________________ Written for Nette's Contest: Fire, Earth, Wind By Carrie Richards 11/20/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Carrie...ahhhh!!! just love this and so many others I am reading on this list. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:38 PM
So wonderful. I just love the poems her contest produced. congrats for the win.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win! Happy Thanksgiving...hugs, Rhonda
Carmack Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Perfect. Congrats.
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 7:04 AM
I like the assonance of your piece, not to mention the lilting images, carrie.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your shining win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Your imagery was palpable in this beautiful piece Carrie. It is one of my favorites. Congratulations!
Schumacker Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Hi Brenda, This is one of the most cohesive natural ones I've happened upon. Great job. It was enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl
Richards Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Thank you, Earl. I've often done the same thing.....mentioned the wrong name........but I always appreciate the wonderful comment. Thank you very much !! :) Happy Thanksgiving !
Schumacker Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Hi Carrie, So sorry. It was your poem and your name meant for the above captioned message. To be sure; let me restate my sentiments right here right now; This is one of the most cohesive natural ones I've happened upon. Great job. It was enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your excellent win. Have a great night Carrie. Earl
Yvonne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:18 PM
I would of liked to see this one placed higher. Congratulations on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 7:08 PM
There's sure a lot of wind lovers? I haven't read one earth mother yet? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Haight Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie. I clearly saw the imagery of the wind moving across the fields impacting the wheat and cornstalks. Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 5:27 PM
Well done Carrie. I found this very enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:58 PM
I love the continuation of the theme throughout the 3 verses - beautifully penned - many congrats Carrie:-) hugs jan xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Wonderful imagery, Carrie! I feel the autumn winds...you have wriiten a sure winner...have a beautiful weekend! Hugs, Rhonda
Meade Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 9:24 PM
I love this poem -- as an old farm boy who spent many summers in corn field I could taste, feels and hear the corn wind!! All the very best.
Meade Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 9:24 PM
I love this poem -- as an old farm boy who spent many summers in corn field I could taste, feels and hear the corn wind!! All the very best.
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