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Through change’s thickets, a frayed and scratched soul bare. But when they wanted my kids, trust, the antidote of despair. Mercy the sickle upon thorns, wielded by a noble prayer. Surprised by an Aunt. Took her funeral for me to find her shine, testaments to a paragon, the selfless kind. Legacies bleed stains as life’s pages, we bind. A poetry community project betrayed its own art to declare that for gold’s empty promise, others mocked and did not care Vanity’s absolute abstracts spilled soup, scalded many there. To Love, when it has you fight or allows the sight to endear. For as the vapor is a life, our memories to disappear. All but the three enshrined, from the harvest of this year. -------------------------------------------- Contest: My abiding memory Sponsor:Viv Wigley Written: 01.09.16

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Date: 3/6/2016 4:57:00 PM
Rob, did you check out the Equations contest yet? I was thinking that might be a topic you would be good with . It is kicking my butt!!
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Date: 3/6/2016 12:38:00 AM
Rob, this is a beautiful write, I really like your style and use of words and phrases, wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:54:00 PM
may we reap more reveries to fill our days with delight, rob.. greeat work!..huggs
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:29:00 AM
Rob..."To Love, when it has you fight or allows the sight to endear. For as the vapor is a life, our memories to disappear." Love this verse it's my favorite..Well written! have a great day!!! -luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:28:00 PM
thanks for commenting on my poem today. I hope you are having a GREAT night, Rob.
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:17:00 PM
Brilliantly crafted with excellent language and imagery. Superb xaxaxa rhyming and smooth cadence. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/24/2016 7:17:00 PM
Memories must be held onto even though we cannot hold them. By sharing them through poetry they will last forever... These flowing lines were written beautifully, Rob. Good luck in Viv's contest!
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:06:00 PM
Impressed by the power of your expressions, Rob!
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Date: 1/20/2016 6:31:00 PM
An intriguing write Rob...well penned..
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Date: 1/17/2016 7:41:00 AM
Your language is mesmerising. Beautifully presented. Best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 1/15/2016 7:08:00 PM
ok, I know your writing is so deep!! But I think I got at least two of these things that happened to you from last year . OH, and the Soup project. It just came to me what THAT reference was!! Now you have me wondering what the other 12 would have been!!! I sure enjoyed this.
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Date: 1/15/2016 10:06:00 AM
Great job. A most poetic poem. I love the style and all the meanings therein. Good luck with the contest though I feel like you have already won - this is just so right on. CayCay
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:35:00 PM
It always makes me smile when I read something that I know I could never write ~~ James :)
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Date: 1/9/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your memories, Rob. The first stanza leaves me wanting to know more....The middle one is one I can relate to. Sad to say goodbye...but it is also a time for reflection. The third one....Yes. Scalded seems an appropriate word. Life is a vapor...that is true. Lovely write. Good luck in the contest.
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