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Through change’s thickets,
a frayed and scratched soul bare.
But when they wanted my kids,
trust, the antidote of despair.
Mercy the sickle upon thorns,
wielded by a noble prayer.

Surprised by an Aunt.
Took her funeral for me to find
her shine, testaments to
a paragon, the selfless kind.
Legacies bleed stains
as life’s pages, we bind.

A poetry community project
betrayed its own art to declare
that for gold’s empty promise,
others mocked and did not care
Vanity’s absolute abstracts
spilled soup, scalded many there.

To Love, when it has you fight
or allows the sight to endear.
For as the vapor is a life,
our memories to disappear.
All but the three enshrined,
from the harvest of this year.

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Contest: My abiding memory
Sponsor:Viv Wigley
Written: 01.09.16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Rob, did you check out the Equations contest yet? I was thinking that might be a topic you would be good with . It is kicking my butt!!
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Rob, this is a beautiful write, I really like your style and use of words and phrases, wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~
Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 12:54 PM
may we reap more reveries to fill our days with delight, rob.. greeat work!..huggs
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Rob..."To Love, when it has you fight or allows the sight to endear. For as the vapor is a life, our memories to disappear." Love this verse it's my favorite..Well written! have a great day!!! -luloo *Smiles*
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:28 PM
thanks for commenting on my poem today. I hope you are having a GREAT night, Rob.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Brilliantly crafted with excellent language and imagery. Superb xaxaxa rhyming and smooth cadence. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Deschler Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Memories must be held onto even though we cannot hold them. By sharing them through poetry they will last forever... These flowing lines were written beautifully, Rob. Good luck in Viv's contest!
Lalion Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Impressed by the power of your expressions, Rob!
May Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 6:31 PM
An intriguing write Rob...well penned..
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Your language is mesmerising. Beautifully presented. Best of luck with the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 7:08 PM
ok, I know your writing is so deep!! But I think I got at least two of these things that happened to you from last year . OH, and the Soup project. It just came to me what THAT reference was!! Now you have me wondering what the other 12 would have been!!! I sure enjoyed this.
Godwin Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Great job. A most poetic poem. I love the style and all the meanings therein. Good luck with the contest though I feel like you have already won - this is just so right on. CayCay
Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:35 PM
It always makes me smile when I read something that I know I could never write ~~ James :)
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January 9, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for sharing your memories, Rob. The first stanza leaves me wanting to know more....The middle one is one I can relate to. Sad to say goodbye...but it is also a time for reflection. The third one....Yes. Scalded seems an appropriate word. Life is a vapor...that is true. Lovely write. Good luck in the contest.
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