Beautiful Ones

Beautiful Ones

Aloft in the steam, they look like Eagles.
Perched now on the edge of the bowl,
proud courtesies peck the kind and meek
with true meanings and Premier trophies.

Unprecedented vanity creates illusion 
with self appointed monarchs. 
Court jesters perform a merry dance 
patronizing peasants. 

Draws the gaze towards the stage,
demands the ‘groundlings’ awe.
Under their script, the knees bend
as truth is removed by deleted scenes.

Kings and queens laugh sadistically 
offering a standing ovation, but 
festivities are interrupted abruptly, 
as valiant knights rebel against oppression.

Disrobed, their crowns become 
spears through the sternum’s shield,
impales hearts that only bleed
weak fallacies and pretentious devices.

As their guise becomes clear, 
anemic vultures are revealed. 
Perched upon a bowl of blood, 
anticipating their next persecution.

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A collaboration with Silent One
Inspired by the Globe Theatre
05.16.16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/22/2017 11:03:00 PM
I know these connie types!No Tommys for me
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Date: 11/3/2016 10:19:00 AM
It's masterpiece created by you and silent one dear friend Rob. "Unprecedented vanity creates illusion, with self appointed monarchs. Court jesters perform a merry dance patronizing peasants." Great write from your collaboration Rob and thank you for your visit on my new poem. Will revisit your pages soon. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:25:00 PM
My gosh ,Rob. You still do not have a new poem in all these months? What do I have to do? Beam you in the head??
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Date: 7/15/2016 6:52:00 PM
Wow this is an awesome collaboration Rob. I can tell you know your history. Also, I meant to thank you for the 7th placement in your Screwed XIV contest. I appreciate that. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 6/21/2016 10:12:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a good night Rob.
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Date: 6/11/2016 10:06:00 PM
soup mail!..hugggs
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Date: 6/11/2016 5:51:00 PM
I enjoyed rereading this beauty. Thanks for my placement in your contest Rob.
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Date: 6/8/2016 10:54:00 AM
We need more poems like this.
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Date: 6/8/2016 8:10:00 AM
Fabulous theatrical work fellas. Most impressed.
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Date: 6/3/2016 9:02:00 PM
Hey Rob, still waiting for new material from you!!! Yes, cinders was one of my five words I needed to use in that poem you listened to. Tim's challenge to us was to use the longest word in each of five of our top poems at Soup. So I got Cinder, September and the other three words mentioned at the poem. It was a really awesome challenge he gave us.
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:17:00 AM
What a tremendous Colaboration. I am truly impressed! A 7 my friends.
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Date: 5/31/2016 11:26:00 PM
Revisiting this one... wondering if I saved it to my favorites (I'll have to check)... Hope you write more soon Rob.
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Date: 5/26/2016 3:58:00 PM
what a fabulous collaboration Rob and S1 the imagery sure is hard hitting:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2016 11:36:00 AM
Good collaboration, Rob :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/23/2016 1:02:00 PM
Wowww this is epic :) Very well-done. It reminds a little of something... can't quite put my finger on it.... hmm. Anyway. Awesome collab, guys.
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Date: 5/21/2016 2:49:00 AM
what a poetic force from two great minds!... one for the books, rob and S.. huggs
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:40:00 PM
You guys do great work together! Loved your inspiration noted at the bottom! The picture S.O showed on his was hilarious. Now hurry up and work on a contest poem!!! You can DO it.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/22/2016 3:57:00 PM
but I am generous with wins!! You would have to screw up pretty bad not to win. hahaha
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/19/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. About the contest poem - you know how I am about them.
Date: 5/18/2016 11:39:00 AM
I already told SO, and you have done an amazing collab Rob! i love it, well done :)-luloo
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/18/2016 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 5/16/2016 3:06:00 PM
Well done to the both of you! I had not realized it was a co-write, not till I came to the end. Enjoyed the content; the Globe Theatre can be very inspiring. ~ Regards // paul
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/17/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 5/16/2016 2:31:00 PM
Now thats poetry, great write!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/17/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Arthur.
Date: 5/16/2016 9:54:00 AM
Terrific piece Rob...The last two stanzas were outstanding.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/17/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Tim.
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