Beautiful Ones

Beautiful Ones

Aloft in the steam, they look like Eagles.
Perched now on the edge of the bowl,
proud courtesies peck the kind and meek
with true meanings and Premier trophies.

Unprecedented vanity creates illusion 
with self appointed monarchs. 
Court jesters perform a merry dance 
patronizing peasants. 

Draws the gaze towards the stage,
demands the ‘groundlings’ awe.
Under their script, the knees bend
as truth is removed by deleted scenes.

Kings and queens laugh sadistically 
offering a standing ovation, but 
festivities are interrupted abruptly, 
as valiant knights rebel against oppression.

Disrobed, their crowns become 
spears through the sternum’s shield,
impales hearts that only bleed
weak fallacies and pretentious devices.

As their guise becomes clear, 
anemic vultures are revealed. 
Perched upon a bowl of blood, 
anticipating their next persecution.

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A collaboration with Silent One
Inspired by the Globe Theatre
05.16.16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lariviere Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 11:03 PM
I know these connie types!No Tommys for me
Kapoor Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:19 AM
It's masterpiece created by you and silent one dear friend Rob. "Unprecedented vanity creates illusion, with self appointed monarchs. Court jesters perform a merry dance patronizing peasants." Great write from your collaboration Rob and thank you for your visit on my new poem. Will revisit your pages soon. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:25 PM
My gosh ,Rob. You still do not have a new poem in all these months? What do I have to do? Beam you in the head??
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Wow this is an awesome collaboration Rob. I can tell you know your history. Also, I meant to thank you for the 7th placement in your Screwed XIV contest. I appreciate that. Mahalo, Connie
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 10:12 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a good night Rob.
Onclaud Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 10:06 PM
soup mail!..hugggs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 5:51 PM
I enjoyed rereading this beauty. Thanks for my placement in your contest Rob.
Teagan Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 10:54 AM
We need more poems like this.
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Fabulous theatrical work fellas. Most impressed.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 9:02 PM
Hey Rob, still waiting for new material from you!!! Yes, cinders was one of my five words I needed to use in that poem you listened to. Tim's challenge to us was to use the longest word in each of five of our top poems at Soup. So I got Cinder, September and the other three words mentioned at the poem. It was a really awesome challenge he gave us.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:17 AM
What a tremendous Colaboration. I am truly impressed! A 7 my friends.
Teagan Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Revisiting this one... wondering if I saved it to my favorites (I'll have to check)... Hope you write more soon Rob.
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 3:58 PM
what a fabulous collaboration Rob and S1 the imagery sure is hard hitting:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Good collaboration, Rob :) Hugs Eve
Teagan Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Wowww this is epic :) Very well-done. It reminds a little of something... can't quite put my finger on it.... hmm. Anyway. Awesome collab, guys.
Onclaud Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 2:49 AM
what a poetic force from two great minds!... one for the books, rob and S.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 3:40 PM
You guys do great work together! Loved your inspiration noted at the bottom! The picture S.O showed on his was hilarious. Now hurry up and work on a contest poem!!! You can DO it.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 3:57 PM
but I am generous with wins!! You would have to screw up pretty bad not to win. hahaha
Carmack Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Andrea. About the contest poem - you know how I am about them.
Scars Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 11:39 AM
I already told SO, and you have done an amazing collab Rob! i love it, well done :)-luloo
Carmack Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Thank you Laura.
Callus Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Well done to the both of you! I had not realized it was a co-write, not till I came to the end. Enjoyed the content; the Globe Theatre can be very inspiring. ~ Regards // paul
Carmack Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Paul.
Vaso Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Now thats poetry, great write!
Carmack Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Arthur.
Smith Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Terrific piece Rob...The last two stanzas were outstanding.
Carmack Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Thank you Tim.
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