Notes About The Poem

This poem was inspired by an Avatar photo I recently found on PS.

Nayda

Beyond the skills of escorts
and the appeal of other playthings,
smolders the need of the soul
infused to best every man.
Twelve years have taken
the scars out of the memories,
from the last time I was
up and through
just to come down and out
to find every fairy tale
extends it’s hand
to some tragedy.
The odds don’t warrant
the time of practical effort.
Too keen to the liabilities,
always calculating ends.
It is not the demands of over
or having to start something new
rather, better to remain alone
than to be let down again.
But now I see you,
and it makes me pause
so still, with the whisper --
Are you sure?
	Falls into a deafening singularity 
forbidding even a scream, it’s escape.
I sit and can only see
the touch of Heaven
reaching across the Caribbean
to color your face.
As your smile holds the songs
of every dawn’s temptress,
under the soft disposition
of your eyes 
rests a divine spirit’s symmetry, 
smoothing features
while lensing each strand
the perfect frame.
That once moved a favored King
to murder a man, only to bring
the sword into his own house.
Enabled an army to take 
a strong city with just one horse.
And enslaved the envy of Venus
to sharpen leaden arrows,
but fury slipped her hands
and bled her wrists out.
Blood clotted on the cold muck
of her grave, a suffocating cocoon.
Immersed the viewer becomes, 
and timeless the window
of the heart that is God’s craft,
denying the deceiver’s forgery
of any singed carnality.
As if proximity has been given 
within the mist of your perfume,
in just this one picture
of your face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Teagan Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 12:54 AM
This is really amazing, Rob, that you can write such a beautiful poem from seeing a small picture of someone. I'm always impressed with your skill and your kindness.
Callus Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Now I'm intrigued...wondering what avatar inspired this beautiful poem Rob! Somewhat enlightened by the comments of yours which I read further down. Well done! #7 // paul
Makama Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7
Vaso Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 5:36 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, sometimes the words just resonate so well with my own thoughts, I especially liked the lines "reaching across the Caribbean to color your face."
A   Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 1:02 AM
WOW>.. PD///
Dalei Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Well deigned one. I enjoyed. "a strong city with just one horse" is very impressive.
Deschler Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 11:34 PM
An excellent poem, Rob... While reading this I could almost picture an artist studying his inspiration as he paints... Beautifully penned!
Manassian Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:45 PM
Wow...how beautiful to be so inspired, Rob. That's quite the tribute write. Amazing. I wish I had seen the Avatar you are writing of. Great write. Thanks for your visit to my work. I was late in my response, but have left a comment on yours. Blessings.
Carmack Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Thank you Eileen for reading & commenting. Have a great time in Malta. See you when you get back. God Bless.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Rob, just read your reply to me below here. It sounds like you know a lot about photography!!!
Carmack Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:16 PM
I will have to investigate photography more, that would be interesting, similar to what I did for that Black and White photography contest Plato did here before he left. I think that poem was 'Exposing the Soul".
Carmack Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:14 PM
I once dated a woman that was into photography, but the terms below are astronomical terms. Gravitational Lensing, mass bending light. I was using this to describe how her hair lays or was laid around her face. And the singularity of the face, like the pull of a black hole in space. The power and effects, etc.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 6:04 PM
I haven't seen the picture bu this sure is a vivid recreation. Your phrasing, '...the soft disposition of your eyes,' '...a divine spirits's symmetry,' simply divine! Well done Rob. Best wishes, Keith
Carmack Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thanks Keith. I appreciate you being one of my most consistent readers. God Bless.
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:42 PM
oh WAIT, now I remember!!! It's the picture that I had commented on and that you liked so much. Wow, what a compliment to Nayda!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Rob, wow, this is some amazing poetry. of course, you know me, i don't quite "get it" but this one part here: it really got me: I sit and can only see the touch of Heaven reaching across the Caribbean to color your face. (that is so beautiful) Also I loved the second half of this poem. The imagery so wonderful!
Carmack Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:54 AM
The singularity and lensing used in the poem was in the gravitational sense, the effect of black holes in space. Those forces and effects matched the intensity of the draw of the avatar. Thank you for your compliments.
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Rob, this is BEAUTIFUL and so well written, 7 ~
Carmack Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thanks Constance.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 9:50 AM
I feel very honored with this poem Rob.
Carmack Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Nayda for that inspirational avatar. It is a very profound and powerful photo. It stayed with me after I first saw it, and several days later, I started to write about it. I am glad you like the end result. God Bless You.
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 4:55 AM
wow, rob... a most appealing melody; your words find their place in things mystical!..huggs
Carmack Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 12:24 PM
'Wow' is what it was like when I first saw the avatar. Thank you Nette for reading and commenting on this poem. Hugs back to you 10 fold.
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