The Cross

The Cross and promised afterlife,
a whisper’s echo – Father’s call,
to hear The Way, The Truth, The Life.

From Eden lost within our strife, 
forever’s shade both great and small, 
The Cross and promised afterlife.

Horizons sharper than a knife,
Jerusalem’s divine new wall,
to see The Way, The Truth, The Life.

Those dead sins that used to run rife,
his blood has now removed it all,
The Cross and promised afterlife.

A groom and his appointed wife,
for every child first had to fall
to know The Way, The Truth, The Life.

The heartbeats like the drum and fife,
didactic letters sent by Paul,
The Cross and promised afterlife, 
to live The Way, The Truth, The Life.

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Poem Written: 01.08.19 - 01.09.18
Form: Villanelle in Iambic Tetrameter

Current Contest: Your Best 2019-2020 Villanelle
Sponsor: William Kekaula

First Contest: Villanelle Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Clear message so beautiful.. Your craft and wisdom are amazing. Thank you for this wonderful piece
Carmack Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:40 PM
TY Funom, and God Bless you.
Lindley Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Without any doubt in my mind this a true and brilliantly crafted piece. Afav and a pleasure to read this morn.
Carmack Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 1:38 AM
Thank you & God Bless you Robert.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 6:32 PM
I never knew this one was here. It's a lovely write, Rob. Soupmail for ya.
Carmack Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Thanks.
Duet Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 12:32 AM
Lovely and interesting form. Yes, very well done. P.S. soupmail
Carmack Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 4:31 PM
TY and God Bless you Carole.
Schiavina Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Your poetry is magnificent and singular. Who dares to write about the Cross. Well done.
Carmack Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Frances.
Leiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Loved this one, Rob! Wonderful words of truth and life, amen! Good luck in the contest! :)
Carmack Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thank you & God Bless you Laura.
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 11:03 AM
soulful write which lifts my heart, rob... always a fine writer; that's you!...huggs
Carmack Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Nette with hugs back to you.
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:06 AM
A well written thought provoking verse Rob. Never tried this form, still learning Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Carmack Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 10:18 AM
Thanks Tom. First time for me with this form, it is time consuming, but worth it. If you have the time, you may want to try this contest. I think it will take a while for it to fill.
Staton Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Carmack Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Valerie - thank you for reading & commenting.
Leiser Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Beautiful truths and words of Life are well portrayed in your excellent Villanelle, Rob. Good luck in the contest! :)
Carmack Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Thank you Laura.
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