Moon Flower Poet Pantoum

Poet's Hurdle

Stare vacantly at nowhere
Almost beyond recall
Chase the string of flea in ear
With hopes and iron will

Almost beyond recall
Words seem exhausting
With hopes and iron will
Let the journey keep going

Words seem exhausting
Unravel its quandary
Let the journey keep going
Face the uncertainty

Unravel its quandary
Chase the string of flea in ear
Face the uncertainty
Stare vacantly at nowhere

03.20.17

Song: "Wither"
by Dream Theater

8th Place

"Pantoum Form:
What Will tomorrow Bring" 

3rd Place

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Eve Roper July 4, 2017 at 8:26 PM Moon Flower, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~* Moon Flower July 6, 2017 at 4:28 AM Hello there Eve! Thank you the placement! :)

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2017 at 6:11 PM Big congrats to you in Rob's contest. I enjoyed how the lines were short and not super long ones! Great way to do a pantoum Moon Flower April 26, 2017 at 9:35 PM Thanks for the kind words, Andrea. :)

Rob Carmack April 18, 2017 at 10:45 PM Congrats & thank you for supporting my contest. Moon Flower April 20, 2017 at 10:32 PM Thank you for the placement, Rob. :)