Spider Web

filigree shimmers
sunlit dewdrop tiara
graces summer rose

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Debbie Duncan

July 23, 2015 at 8:55 PM

good one Viv, :) my 8yr old granddaughter & I were just reading and watching spiders on utube ;)

Viv Wigley

July 23, 2015 at 10:00 PM

Aren't children wonderful? They can pick up slugs and watch spiders, but when they become teenagers they scream when you tell them to tidy their room..... thanks for visiting my Haiku, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Viv x

Suzanne Delaney

July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM

wow I love this one. I have faved it and give it a 7 because spider poetry is a favorite topic of mine. I once wrote one titled 'Cobwebs on the Rosebush'.....great minds lol

Viv Wigley

July 9, 2015 at 12:04 AM

Hi, Suzanne. Just been to read your piece, love 'pinkened dawn'- nice description. And the way such a short verse goes from light to dark and then a bright finish with rebirth. Lovely. Thanks for visiting, and the fave. Very kind. Viv x

Sneha Rv

May 26, 2015 at 6:45 AM

This is lovely!! :D :D

Viv Wigley

May 26, 2015 at 6:58 AM

Hello and thanks, Sneha, for your comment. it's nice when something so small and easily missed can catch you attention and inspire you. Blessings, Viv x

Judy Konos

April 7, 2015 at 7:55 AM

That's a WOW WOW...Thanks!

Viv Wigley

April 7, 2015 at 11:23 AM

Thanks for popping by, Judy- will check your work out soon. Love, Viv x

Paul Callus

April 4, 2015 at 8:14 AM

A lovely haiku which presents an attractive picture with nice choice of words. #7 // paul

Viv Wigley

April 4, 2015 at 8:43 AM

Thanks, Paul, I landed on my feet with this one. Regards, Viv

Viv Wigley

April 1, 2015 at 2:16 AM

Thanks, Rob. Nearly missed my bus with this one. Worth the brief experience, though. Regards, Viv

Rob Carmack

April 1, 2015 at 2:03 AM

A skilled favorite of beauty.

Viv Wigley

April 1, 2015 at 2:17 AM

Thanks, Rob. Nearly missed my bus with this one. Worth the brief experience, though. Regards, Viv (after filling in the wrong box- duh!)

Andrea Dietrich

March 30, 2015 at 2:02 PM

Wonderful imagery, Viv!

Viv Wigley

March 30, 2015 at 11:46 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I composed it whilst standing at the bus stop, looking over a neighbouring garden. It pays to be a little more observant in life, I think. Viv x