The Dead and Dying

Disjointed beings beg the questions – still
an ashen horse delivers what is owed.
Decisions kneel before compassion’s will,
to stop and help a turtle cross the road.

To comfort one another, brings them home,
confides the mornings, bedtimes now alone.
Concentric dreams preserve the lost to roam
among the ash and fields of sculptured stone.

From every foolish quest, those wasted years,
of mercy - time denies the rich and poor.
Whatever left, upon regrets and tears,
behind the coffins, curtains of velour.

Receive his blood the only way across,
eternal rock we trust in Savior’s Cross.

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Contest: Death
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Written: 10.20.17
Form: English Sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Maverick Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 3:27 AM
Hello Rob, I am find this a most powerful write full of truth, not the least that of Jesus being the door to the most vibrant of lives, for those who accept Him who has turned in 'fact death upside down, will know the fullest of lives upon departing this transient existence.. Best wishes to you.'
Carmack Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:31 PM
TY Joe and God Bless You.
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Very nice write, makes for a smooth engaging read. Well deserved win, by the sounds.
Carmack Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Thanks Scott.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your win with this insightful piece Rob! : )
Carmack Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Thank you Connie.
DiMino Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:05 PM
For sure; Christ is the Light and way. Thank you for the continued inspiration. Blessings.
Carmack Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:43 PM
TY Joe, God bless you.
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 4:04 PM
I know how deeply you believe in this, Rob. You are a marvel with your faith. CAn't believe I had not seen that you had put this up earlier. a very belated congrats in Craig's contest. Happy new year, my friend.
Carmack Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:38 AM
TY and happy new year to you too.
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Congrats on your win, Rob.
Carmack Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:59 PM
TY Line.
George   Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 9:38 AM
A very spiritual write, dear Rob. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, Elaine
Carmack Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:59 PM
TY Elaine.
Wigley Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Terrific write, Rob, has a classic feel to it, too. That third stanza is terrific, and a nice finish, too. Regards, Viv
Carmack Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:59 PM
TY Viv, good to see you around again. God Bless.
Manassian Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 11:02 AM
What an amazing write, Rob. That line of "behind the coffins, curtains of velour" really got to me. I didn't expect that lovely couplet at the end, but that's what makes it so much sweeter. Death will be conquered though Him. Amen.
Carmack Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:03 PM
TY Eileen and congrats again on your win. God Bless.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Our Savior is truly the only way we are victors over death. Well said words. Congratulations on your win.
Carmack Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:01 PM
TY for reading and commenting Janis.
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:48 AM
Beautiful use of Iambic Pentameter in your Sonnet Rob.
Carmack Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Many thanks James.
Lawless Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:30 PM
the slow darkness of Death's cloak closing in. An intriguing write Rob, well done.
Carmack Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:00 PM
TY John.
Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Yes, Rob, Jesus is the only way. I love your poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
Carmack Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:59 PM
TY Janice and God Bless.
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Powerfully penned John and the final couplet is a perfect ending to the poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Carmack Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:44 PM
No problem, I just had to play along. Hugs.
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 3:34 PM
oops I must have been having a senior moment or something sorry ROB and congrats on your win:-) :-( hugs jan xx
Carmack Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:32 PM
TY Jan, I will let John know. Hugs back to you.
Daniel Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 8:46 AM
I totally agree with the final couplet, Rob, great sonnet overall:)
Carmack Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 12:58 PM
TY Jo, and God Bless you.
Teagan Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Beautiful sonnet - powerful. especially the final couplet!
Carmack Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 11:49 AM
TY and God Bless you Becca.
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