The Dead and Dying

Disjointed beings beg the questions – still
an ashen horse delivers what is owed.
Decisions kneel before compassion’s will,
to stop and help a turtle cross the road.

To comfort one another, brings them home,
confides the mornings, bedtimes now alone.
Concentric dreams preserve the lost to roam
among the ash and fields of sculptured stone.

From every foolish quest, those wasted years,
of mercy - time denies the rich and poor.
Whatever left, upon regrets and tears,
behind the coffins, curtains of velour.

Receive his blood the only way across,
eternal rock we trust in Savior’s Cross.

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Contest: Death
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Written: 10.20.17
Form: English Sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/9/2018 3:27:00 AM
Hello Rob, I am find this a most powerful write full of truth, not the least that of Jesus being the door to the most vibrant of lives, for those who accept Him who has turned in 'fact death upside down, will know the fullest of lives upon departing this transient existence.. Best wishes to you.'
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/12/2018 4:31:00 PM
TY Joe and God Bless You.
Date: 1/26/2018 12:57:00 AM
Very nice write, makes for a smooth engaging read. Well deserved win, by the sounds.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/12/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Scott.
Date: 1/25/2018 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this insightful piece Rob! : )
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/12/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 1/25/2018 2:05:00 PM
For sure; Christ is the Light and way. Thank you for the continued inspiration. Blessings.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2018 6:43:00 PM
TY Joe, God bless you.
Date: 1/1/2018 4:04:00 PM
I know how deeply you believe in this, Rob. You are a marvel with your faith. CAn't believe I had not seen that you had put this up earlier. a very belated congrats in Craig's contest. Happy new year, my friend.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/3/2018 7:38:00 AM
TY and happy new year to you too.
Date: 11/18/2017 8:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rob.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/19/2017 10:59:00 PM
TY Line.
Date: 11/16/2017 9:38:00 AM
A very spiritual write, dear Rob. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, Elaine
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/19/2017 10:59:00 PM
TY Elaine.
Date: 11/14/2017 9:48:00 PM
Terrific write, Rob, has a classic feel to it, too. That third stanza is terrific, and a nice finish, too. Regards, Viv
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/19/2017 10:59:00 PM
TY Viv, good to see you around again. God Bless.
Date: 11/14/2017 11:02:00 AM
What an amazing write, Rob. That line of "behind the coffins, curtains of velour" really got to me. I didn't expect that lovely couplet at the end, but that's what makes it so much sweeter. Death will be conquered though Him. Amen.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/14/2017 2:03:00 PM
TY Eileen and congrats again on your win. God Bless.
Date: 11/14/2017 8:59:00 AM
Our Savior is truly the only way we are victors over death. Well said words. Congratulations on your win.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/14/2017 2:01:00 PM
TY for reading and commenting Janis.
Date: 11/14/2017 1:48:00 AM
Beautiful use of Iambic Pentameter in your Sonnet Rob.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/14/2017 2:00:00 PM
Many thanks James.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:30:00 PM
the slow darkness of Death's cloak closing in. An intriguing write Rob, well done.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/14/2017 2:00:00 PM
TY John.
Date: 11/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
Yes, Rob, Jesus is the only way. I love your poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/13/2017 12:59:00 PM
TY Janice and God Bless.
Date: 11/4/2017 12:46:00 PM
Powerfully penned John and the final couplet is a perfect ending to the poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2018 6:44:00 PM
No problem, I just had to play along. Hugs.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2017 3:34:00 PM
oops I must have been having a senior moment or something sorry ROB and congrats on your win:-) :-( hugs jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/5/2017 10:32:00 PM
TY Jan, I will let John know. Hugs back to you.
Date: 10/29/2017 8:46:00 AM
I totally agree with the final couplet, Rob, great sonnet overall:)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 10/29/2017 12:58:00 PM
TY Jo, and God Bless you.
Date: 10/28/2017 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet - powerful. especially the final couplet!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 10/28/2017 11:49:00 AM
TY and God Bless you Becca.
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