Rob Carmack Poet Tanka

Forecasts

Tears from yesterday’s
ends in the clouds of both pasts
drowns pain in puddles
as this night’s moon burns through and
bathes a new love’s hope display.

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Contest:  Get Romantic
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Visual #2
03.02.15

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Keith Bickerstaffe December 29, 2015 at 3:28 PM A splendid TANKA in perfect 57577 form with grammatical flow to boot! BRAVO Rob. Best wishes, Keith

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 10, 2015 at 1:21 PM Excellent Tanka

Debbie Guzzi March 17, 2015 at 8:53 AM Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Casarah Nance March 11, 2015 at 5:51 PM Grats on your contest placement. I love the refreshingness you have wrote here :)

Skat A March 8, 2015 at 6:22 PM ROB, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2015 at 12:00 PM Rob, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 7, 2015 at 7:54 PM Great, romantic imagery, Rob...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux March 7, 2015 at 5:41 PM It seems congratulations are in order. Thanks for hosting your Pierced contest, it resulted in some excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading and commenting on your winners list. Goodnight.

Sara Kendrick March 7, 2015 at 3:16 PM Congrats!!! Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 3:05 PM Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2015 at 12:10 AM Rob, this one has some great imagery. congrats for your win. Soupmail.

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2015 at 12:34 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ...This one was a challenge..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 3, 2015 at 1:41 AM Wonderful sad romantic rob! Oh i loved it,, sure to do well in contest,, best wishes!!

Cherl Dunn March 2, 2015 at 1:14 PM Dear Rob, What a sad poetic write here my friend, but I did enjoy it's imagery and love your ending to pull it all together so well, thanks you for the congrads comment, I appricate your words of compliment and I love that line myself, cheri

Maverick Nyambu March 2, 2015 at 11:56 AM Hi Rob, this is superbly terse! Good luck in the contest.

Casarah Nance March 2, 2015 at 10:26 AM Nicely done Rob :)

Jan Allison March 2, 2015 at 10:22 AM you have captured the image so well - great imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx