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Tears from yesterday’s ends in the clouds of both pasts drowns pain in puddles as this night’s moon burns through and bathes a new love’s hope display. ------------------------------------------ Contest: Get Romantic Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Visual #2 03.02.15

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/29/2015 3:28:00 PM

A splendid TANKA in perfect 57577 form with grammatical flow to boot! BRAVO Rob. Best wishes, Keith

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/10/2015 1:21:00 PM

Excellent Tanka

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2015 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:51:00 PM

Grats on your contest placement. I love the refreshingness you have wrote here :)

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:22:00 PM

ROB, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 12:00:00 PM

Rob, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/7/2015 7:54:00 PM

Great, romantic imagery, Rob...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/7/2015 5:41:00 PM

It seems congratulations are in order. Thanks for hosting your Pierced contest, it resulted in some excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading and commenting on your winners list. Goodnight.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2015 3:16:00 PM

Congrats!!! Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:05:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:10:00 AM

Rob, this one has some great imagery. congrats for your win. Soupmail.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2015 12:34:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ...This one was a challenge..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/3/2015 1:41:00 AM

Wonderful sad romantic rob! Oh i loved it,, sure to do well in contest,, best wishes!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/2/2015 1:14:00 PM

Dear Rob, What a sad poetic write here my friend, but I did enjoy it's imagery and love your ending to pull it all together so well, thanks you for the congrads comment, I appricate your words of compliment and I love that line myself, cheri

Maverick Nyambu

Date: 3/2/2015 11:56:00 AM

Hi Rob, this is superbly terse! Good luck in the contest.

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/2/2015 10:26:00 AM

Nicely done Rob :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2015 10:22:00 AM

you have captured the image so well - great imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx