Chainsaw

Helping my father and uncles when I was ten,
felled a tree, on break then ready to go again.

I walked around the corner of the truck
as someone pulled the cord and I got stuck.

Now that chainsaw’s engine didn’t start,
but it didn’t have to, to rip my skin apart.

Right through my jeans, but not too deep,
saw my flesh before it began to seep.

Dyed my t-shirt like a canvas with the body’s ink,
those cells made a mosaic from red to pink.

To my surprise, I was left with no pain,
but anesthetic’s steel lacked the mercy of the bar chain.

Skilled hands drove a cutting needle’s threads
through clotting cascades and capillary beds.

On my right thigh, a scar’s pledge,
for every kind of limb, Stihl has the edge.

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Contest: Any Rhyme Form – An Early Childhood Memory
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Written: 04.20.18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Koplin Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:54 PM
I burned wood for heat for 13 years, I had a lot of close calls be got very lucky and no accidents.
Carmack Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:07 PM
I grew up with wood stoves and still have an old Fisher. The incident did not make me fearful of chainsaws, just made me more careful. Nothing like wood heat on a frigid day
Barden Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 8:54 PM
This brings memories, Rob ... much of my childhood was spent in the woods, tree houses, blazing miles of dirt bike trails, but also clearing trees and selling cord wood, and I had many a "close call" with my trusty Mac 10-10, one that cut the toe of my boot straight through, but just scraped my flesh, (separated my fingers on my right hand, but that was sheet metal and a different project). I was blessed to be a kid at a time when parents had few worries about kidnapping. Love this write!! :-)
Carmack Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:01 AM
I am extremely careful now, including wearing chaps and ear protection. For years, I didn't wear either. The fingers injury with the sheet metal must have been rough.
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Hi, Rob, just a quick stop here to tell you thanks for seeing my poem. Have a wonderful WEdnesday!
Wigley Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:28 AM
Congrats, Rob, on a wince-inducing write! Regards, Viv
Carmack Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 8:06 PM
TY Viv.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:42 AM
wow, it's so great to see you enter a contest here,Rob. This is one of your best. I think the topic really motivated you and it's interesting you chose something painful. those kind stay with us for sure. Congrats. I hope it placed high.
Carmack Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 1:06 AM
I use a chainsaw regularly throughout the year so that played a part in my choice as well. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Horsman Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Wow, painful, the experience that is, love the poetry..
Carmack Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:28 PM
TY Harry.
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rob, oh wow!!! falling trees is not a safe job...wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Exactly why chaps should be worn, I was lucky the engine didn't start.
Rose  Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 3:45 PM
well done Rob, congrats
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:16 PM
TY Pixie.
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 3:42 PM
That would be a memory very hard to forget, Rob! Well done, and congrats on your podium win. Sandra :)
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on your win. A well-written story. Like the last line.
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thanks Susan.
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Great storytelling, Rob, with a witty wrap. Congrats on your well deserved bronze medal win.
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Line for my placement and inspiring this poem.
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