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In the Auditorium Part Ii

In the Auditorium de la Panacée, not yet perfume or pheromone, but only what he can see, drawn exit as she heads home. Every step on pulse of Montpellier, one dropped program chances today. Prudent for an approach easier, when she stops at a Café. Took a sip and tripped closer, now pierced by what he can’t see. Courtesy of Swiss industry and a photographer in the Auditorium de la Panacée. -------------------------------------------------------- A collaboration with Julia Ward who composed Part I which can be found on her list.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/28/2015 7:20:00 AM
Good job
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Date: 8/25/2015 12:34:00 AM
enjoyed your whimsical work, rob... greeat job!,, huggs
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Date: 8/24/2015 3:20:00 PM
hmmm, a little mystery at the end there. This seems to be a guy trying to meet a woman? Wonderful job collaborating with Julia!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/25/2015 7:49:00 PM
Yes, I realize it was a woman already seen, Julia. At the time I read it, I did not know her name was Maria!
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Julia Ward
Date: 8/24/2015 11:49:00 PM
He is trying to catch up with a woman already seen. My poem in Part I introduces you to the woman in question, called Maria, so there is no mystery, Andrea! (That poem in Part I was my idea and was written before our decision to collaborate.)
Date: 8/24/2015 3:51:00 AM
An excellent follow-up to mine! A happy 7 is accorded. Hugs, Julia
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