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Seven For Chaos and Order-Rebirth

Tomorrow reveals a quiet world with words unspoken From a tender love that was ravaged and lost A heart once rich now poor and broken By yesterday's betrayal and the amount it cost Yet in coldest dark there's a flickering light To shine and glow where your shadows form Its splayed light rises and the heart is warm 1/28/17 contest Seven for Chaos and Order

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Date: 2/2/2017 2:34:00 PM
Way to go Frederic, congrats on top placement!
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Date: 2/2/2017 2:17:00 PM
Congrats!!! Frederic...job well done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/1/2017 5:19:00 PM
Congrats Frederic, for your well, deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:39:00 PM
Beautiful, Frederic. Such an emotional 'chaos and order' presentation. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:54:00 PM
Wonderful, Frederic. I hope it scored high.I am seeing congrats underneath here , so I am glad you made the winners' list!
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:33:00 PM
Hope is beautifully showcased in the verse.. well deserved win, Fredrick... Very many congrats...
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Date: 2/1/2017 11:43:00 AM
Excellent flow and essence Frederic. Congrats.
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Date: 2/1/2017 9:26:00 AM
fascinatingly inked poem... the study of contrast between heartache and acceptance was tenderly implied.. many congrats on your top spot and thanks for joining, frederick...huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/1/2017 10:09:00 AM
Thank you dear poet for the placement an interesting contest

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