Why

Conception’s stain imputed sin again
my first cry swallowed by a bulb syringe.
At five years old, a chapel’s altar call
remained in me, the echo of your name.
Among a culture’s art of chase and hunt,
temptation’s treasures took my youth away,
my own Bathshebas broke Pandora’s box.
A pride unwilling for divine reproof,
evolved a spoken vengeance into blades
that would deliver the wounds my fists couldn’t.
Profane reflections gave illusions right,
the blind impatience always in my heart
to feel the edge of your permissive will,
left bones now heavy with the wages paid.
A whisper under the seas of our noise,
conviction bleeds the shadows from our hearts,
devoid of life, the chambers shown depraved.
The light of Christ’s salvation left untouched
at every worldly summit – nothing there.
Can’t get through the eye of the needle gate,
a want, to need, submit to bread and wine.
To change a man, the written Sword will carve
itself inside the soul, a life now new.
Not just what you have done or what you give,
but more of what you are that answers why.

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Written: 02.15.18

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Date: 10/18/2018 7:35:00 PM
A spiritual beauty Rob. Such sincerity. Please accept my apologies for responding to your comment so late on my work and taking so long to read yours. Things are a bit hard here so I haven't really been reading or writing much these days. I am very grateful that you still give me your time and attention.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 10/27/2018 5:32:00 PM
Oh my goodness what a smile you've given me this evening! :D Thanks so much Rob :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 10/22/2018 9:54:00 PM
No problem concerning the delay, you are worth the wait. I hope and pray that things get easier for you. I am grateful for your time and attention as well.
Date: 10/12/2018 12:40:00 PM
The Word is a sword that cuts down to the bone and morrow. Yes, that biblical concept is so cleverly expounded on here. I've been struggling with similar thoughts lately. Grace is so freely offered and yet we cling to sin...afraid of having to "give too much up" when He gave it all. Thanks for the inspiration tonight.
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Date: 10/13/2018 11:28:00 PM
Yes, giving up too much. A couple of years ago I was active in a premeditated sin I had been in for a long time. One day I thought about Christ and everything he has done for us. I thought to myself, I can't give this up for him? So I did, at least in deed. Not trying to gain salvation through works, but showing appreciation. Thank you for reading & commenting, and God Bless you.
Date: 4/26/2018 3:04:00 PM
Very powerful write! My favorite line is, "To change a man, the written Sword will carve itself inside the soul, a life now new."
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:14:00 PM
TY Juliet, God Bless.
Date: 3/10/2018 11:31:00 AM
Rob: Well done. I can't write like this but certainly enjoy you "Soupers" that can. Keep them coming and thanks again for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Rob Carmack
Date: 3/12/2018 6:24:00 PM
TY Old Buck and God bless you.
Date: 2/20/2018 4:31:00 PM
A solid read rob, so powerful. Yet inspiring.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/26/2018 10:07:00 PM
God bless you Harry.
Date: 2/18/2018 11:42:00 PM
Expressive and powerful!!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/26/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 2/18/2018 12:45:00 AM
Wow. Hugely powerful piece, Rob, and beautifully constructed. Good luck in the contest, though methinks you won't need it. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:07:00 PM
TY for reading and commenting Viv.
Date: 2/16/2018 6:36:00 AM
We all need God or spiritual guidance, we all sin, just differently.. A very good poem for the contest Rob..
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/26/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thank You S1.
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