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----------------------------------- Written: 08.07.20 – 08.09.20 Contest: All Pets Go To Heaven Sponsor: Constance La France

Blessed are those that before already knew the living ark for in him they found Heaven one day Boo. His light casts no shadows — it goes right thru, all tears will be wiped away in God’s Heaven one day Boo. Angelic songs comfort animals too, nothing will ever die again in Heaven one day Boo. Find sweet Smudges among the flowers blue and tell her mother is coming to Heaven one day Boo. I have already started to miss you, tomorrow always comes too soon, til Heaven one day Boo.

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/19/2021 5:44:00 PM

Lovely write, Rob, at first at was about talking to a child then read below. It is very hard to lose a Pet. The few I've lost in the past. This one I own now is elven and I have had him since he was six weeks old. Two years ago I thought I lost him shortly after I lost my husband and I couldn't stand him. I got very luck he got well. He had an a cutie pancreatitis. Soup mail, sorry I guess i thought I sent it.

Rob Carmack
Date: 5/21/2021 11:17:00 AM

Never thought about that, but yes it could be about a child. I wish pets lived longer. Glad yours pulled through. I got the soup mail and replied. God bless you Eve.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2020 7:48:00 AM

To lose a beloved pet truly and deeply hurts, in my life I've lost several.It hurts each and every time. Your poem reminds us that love is unconditional, a blessing , a gift and the greatest of treasures.. God bless.. A fav ...

Rob Carmack
Date: 9/5/2020 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Robert. You and your family remain in my prayers.

Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2020 9:49:00 AM

Rob, congratulations on your win in my All Pets Go To Heaven challenge with this emotional write, I know what it feels like to be waiting for the day your pet dies, I did that with Smudges and was blessed to have her die in my arms at home while I sang her a lullaby, a FAV for me _Constance

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/31/2020 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Constance and thanks again for my placement and inspiring this poem. “Beauty in Repose” left its impression on me and made its way into my poem.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/28/2020 10:57:00 PM

This is such a sweet sentimental lovely poem though I'm not sure it is about a pet or a person. It is superbly expressed. ............ ............. ............ Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/29/2020 8:48:00 PM

Boo is my dog, he is about 10 years old. 'Smudges' is Constance's cat who went to Heaven about 2 years ago. This poem is me talking to Boo about Heaven. TY for commenting and I will check out your poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 3:39:00 PM

Back with my congrats, as I believe I have seen all your poetry and I just can't get you to write more!!! Hope all is well with you, dear friend.

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/29/2020 8:46:00 PM

TY, all well here, sent you an email earlier today.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/25/2020 10:10:00 AM

This is darling; as is the name “Boo”. The message for Smudges is especially sweet too. Congratulations for your win Rob! xomo

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/25/2020 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Mo.

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/25/2020 5:25:00 AM

Excellent work my friend! Poor Boo Congrats on your win bud!

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/25/2020 3:19:00 PM

Thank You.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 4:46:00 AM

- The loss is like a big hole ... and the house becomes so quiet ... congratulations on your top win, Rob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/25/2020 3:19:00 PM

TY Anne-Lise.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/24/2020 3:30:00 PM

So touching and so comforting, Rob. The love we share with our animals does not end when they leave us but continues across the divide. Congratulations on your win!

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/24/2020 4:00:00 PM

Indeed Sam, I still miss every dog I have ever had. TY for reading and commenting.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/24/2020 3:13:00 PM

Wonderfully written Rob, for a special dog name Boo. Heartfelt piece...

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/24/2020 3:59:00 PM

TY Michael.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2020 1:51:00 PM

a very loving tribute, my friend. God bless Boo!

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/18/2020 7:16:00 PM

Thank you and God bless Snickers too.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/9/2020 8:11:00 PM

"Blessed are those" Reminds me of the Beatitudes. There is something we can learn from animals- they give Unconditional Love. Your thoughts wrap gently around me. Hold your moments with Boo so close. "One Day" I know that day you are not wanting to think about. There is peace in knowing that comfort awaits. ~ Brandy

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/11/2020 7:35:00 PM

It is tough to think about, but I sometimes still do. Helps to keep from taking things for granted, especially time. TY for reading and commenting.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/9/2020 7:01:00 PM

Truly sweet tribute to your gal pup. 'Tomorrow always comes too soon', real tear jerker. His light goes right through (altered from your line) is striking, joy inducing. I'm glad you commited to your touching tribute, Rob.

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/11/2020 7:36:00 PM

Thank you Sigrid. I will be re-visiting your list soon.