Thomas Carney Poet Free verse

A Palindrome Called Temptation

A Palindrome, also called Mirrored Poetry, is a poetry type not listed, so I put it under Free Verse.  If anyone finds a better categoy for this please let me know.  Thomas
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Temptation

Temptation
And **** replaced love
Day after day
We are bombarded
Sex and beauty
Objects over heart
Thoughts lustful, confused reality
Isolation supplanted communication
Clouds out move clarity
Facade my life
~Redemption~
Life my facade
Clarity move out clouds
Communication supplanted isolation
Reality confused lustful thoughts
Heart over objects
Beauty and sex
Bombarded are we
Day after day
Love replaced **** and
Temptation

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Rob Carmack December 10, 2015 at 2:46 PM This is brilliant and going on the list. Thomas Carney December 11, 2015 at 4:16 PM Thank you so much Mr. Rob Carmack. How nice of you. This was my first Palindrome and took a long time to write. I appreciate you sir. Thomas

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2015 at 10:49 AM Yes, there have been some competitions on here using Palindrome..It is not so easy to write..Good job..I don't know any other catergory that you could enter it under though..Sara Thomas Carney February 20, 2015 at 6:35 PM Thanks Sara. Hope you are doing okay. Peace. Thomas

John Posey September 1, 2014 at 11:52 AM Well done, my friend..... Cryptic beauty surrounds indescribable wisdom..... really nice work...... Jake Thomas Carney September 2, 2014 at 5:15 PM Thank you sir. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. Am looking forward to more time on PS. Thomas