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A Palindrome Called Temptation

A Palindrome, also called Mirrored Poetry, is a poetry type not listed, so I put it under Free Verse.  If anyone finds a better categoy for this please let me know.  Thomas
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Temptation

Temptation
And **** replaced love
Day after day
We are bombarded
Sex and beauty
Objects over heart
Thoughts lustful, confused reality
Isolation supplanted communication
Clouds out move clarity
Facade my life
~Redemption~
Life my facade
Clarity move out clouds
Communication supplanted isolation
Reality confused lustful thoughts
Heart over objects
Beauty and sex
Bombarded are we
Day after day
Love replaced **** and
Temptation

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Rob Carmack Date: 12/10/2015 2:46:00 PM This is brilliant and going on the list. Login to Reply Thomas Carney Date: 12/11/2015 4:16:00 PM Thank you so much Mr. Rob Carmack. How nice of you. This was my first Palindrome and took a long time to write. I appreciate you sir. Thomas

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/12/2015 10:49:00 AM Yes, there have been some competitions on here using Palindrome..It is not so easy to write..Good job..I don't know any other catergory that you could enter it under though..Sara Login to Reply Thomas Carney Date: 2/20/2015 6:35:00 PM Thanks Sara. Hope you are doing okay. Peace. Thomas

John Posey Date: 9/1/2014 11:52:00 AM Well done, my friend..... Cryptic beauty surrounds indescribable wisdom..... really nice work...... Jake Login to Reply Thomas Carney Date: 9/2/2014 5:15:00 PM Thank you sir. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. Am looking forward to more time on PS. Thomas