These Days

Met with you the first time, knowing not what I had just found.
Working days and nights beside you, walking unit’s hard ground.
Helping one another in and out of these day’s crisis.
Trust in easy comfort sharing secrets and our vices.
Blinded by your selfless nature under our same God’s eyes.
Colored hues of virtue burned into your soul it rides
Times enduring twelves in truth and depth of pasts and yet-tos.
Corners turning heads to tails in trails you doing time thru.
I have watched you suffer dating burden from his cold hand,
Wanting many times to tell you to break from that dead man.
Wisdom needing to remind me, hope was holding you still.
Losing grip, you make the change and years returning, Love will.
My prayers carry wishes for you, one day’s given good spouse.
Under Holy Ghost’s soft guidance, making your home, God’s house.
Sharing smiles and tears in keeping promise past the last day.
Into Christ’s embrace that shines you through a Heaven’s gateway.
Always just a thought away you will be after our end.
Grateful in my heart to have been given such a rare friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/6/2015 6:52:00 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:38:00 AM
Great poem and a great win, Well done!
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:41:00 AM
My wish for you is to continue winning,congrats on the win Rob...hugg
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Date: 1/1/2015 5:47:00 PM
This poem is special, Rob, Congratulations -- This is a great way to start the new year. Enjoyed reading your winning poem. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/1/2015 4:24:00 PM
congratulations Rob for this fine win
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Date: 1/1/2015 3:40:00 PM
Very personal conversation with a friend. Congratulations on your win and on the depth of your write here, Rob. Inspired by the faithfulness of your friend.
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Date: 1/1/2015 3:33:00 PM
Great poem, Rob, with a powerful message. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 1/1/2015 12:06:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:35:00 PM
A happy new year to you. Such a lovely write, we often come across people who we just get to know too well and invite them to our hearts. Many blessings to you, always, p.d.
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:42:00 AM
Happy New Year rob. Wish you a great 2015.-rajat
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Date: 12/31/2014 8:44:00 AM
:) Wow...are you a prayer warrior for this person, Rob? Intercessory prayer is powerful and effective as it says in James. Sometimes...we just close off our hearts. Lovely write....
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Date: 12/31/2014 2:07:00 AM
this sounds like quite a person that you are supporting. rare and beautiful friend, and you as well!!
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:21:00 PM
Wishing you and yours love and peace in 2015. Armand
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:04:00 PM
This a stunning write. It embraces the reader in the knowledge of God. A Fav for me Rob.
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Date: 12/30/2014 9:19:00 AM
Under the guidance of the God above makes things so much easier a 7, my friend Blessing and a Happy New Year
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:27:00 PM
Magnificent write, Rob! Excellent couplet articulating a powerful message! Love it. Pandita.
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