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Corralled in Plato’s cave, groupies of untenable shadows, silenced their intuitions to the smoke and other sighs. Jamaica’s capital hosted a convention giving an ever-leaving coward’s play a stage, now his work is done. Senior partner and the oldest liar — the younger roo’s handler — watches from his own Whitman’s tower; one man walking past the fire, brave enough to look at the sun, his integrity can see behind it. Hate moved a biased hand against him, but the truth is like The Cross, and vanity will always seek a mirror. Beyond any conviction, immutable. Forever keeping themselves, beautiful. ---------------------------------------- Written: 05.01.20 – 05.03.20 Inspired by the bravery, intellectual honesty and integrity of my friend Mark Koplin.

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Date: 7/12/2020 8:11:00 PM
Keith - 'defend a lie?'. This has been proven? And just so I get this straight, admin answers you on a weekend when they have historically taken much longer to respond to inquiries, when they actually do respond. And you 'abhor those cowards..." who delete comments. Now that is interesting because your sr comrade started this show 5 months ago and then deleted the inflammatory posts. You stated you did not see the posts, but you stayed the course after you were advised and you still speak with sr.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 7/12/2020 11:49:00 PM
If you were concerned about your integrity you would not have doubled down once you were advised on how this all started 5 months ago. You're trying to sow a seed, but there is just too much salt for it to ever grow. That is what this is really about, he has got to you. And I think that about half the intensity of it, is due to you being mad at yourself for reacting the way you did without seeing how it started. But even then, you figured it would blow over, just like it had before, but this time, it did not. This time, more peeps stood up, and some of them left - Lin, Tempo and The Bard is stepping back some. But my buddy is not going away or stepping back.
Date: 6/17/2020 12:11:00 AM
This is wonderful Rob. "the truth is like The Cross, and vanity will always seek a mirror." great line in a wonderful poem. blessings xxoo
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Rob Carmack
Date: 7/8/2020 8:39:00 PM
Many thanks Connie.
Date: 6/2/2020 3:44:00 PM
Back again to read this wonderful piece my friend. I pray you are safe and well. And able to soon gift more of your wonderful poetry here. God bless
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/7/2020 9:09:00 AM
I am busy, but well. TY and God Bless you too.
Date: 6/2/2020 7:49:00 AM
Hi Rob, I'm glad I found your poem this morning. You have shown such love, respect and admiration for a friend. The depths of your tribute honors two great men of integrity. Thanks for sharing. xx Rhonda
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/7/2020 9:09:00 AM
TY Rhonda.
Date: 5/19/2020 12:45:00 AM
This analogy is deep and full of meaning. I know it is many layered, but the tribute is obvious and stands out. Standing for conviction is essential to survival. Blessings and thanks for your visit to my blog. :)
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Date: 5/19/2020 12:45:00 AM
This analogy is deep and full of meaning. I know it is many layered, but the tribute is obvious and stands out. Standing for conviction is essential to survival. Blessings and thanks for your visit to my blog. :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/19/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thank You Eileen. Good to have you back.
Date: 5/17/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Rob, blessings are always appreciated. ;0)
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Date: 5/16/2020 8:55:00 AM
This is intriguing and requires depth of thought. I can see why it achieved POTD. Congratulations! Sorry I am late to the celebration but I am none the less glad to have stopped by. ;0)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/17/2020 9:08:00 AM
No problem with being late, I am often the same. Thank you for the visit and God bless you and your family Richard.
Date: 5/13/2020 2:07:00 PM
hello Mark Rob, beauty is on the inside and out. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2020 6:37:00 PM
Hello Rob Carmack, yes everyone shows their inner beauty.You are we,come. enjoy your day my friend.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/13/2020 6:12:00 PM
Indeed, but it is the inside I am most concerned about, and sooner or later, everyone shows. TY for reading and commenting.
Date: 5/9/2020 7:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem and inspiring tribute. Congratulatios on your well deserved POTD.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/10/2020 11:34:00 AM
Thank you JC.
Date: 5/8/2020 8:04:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to Mark, Rob. I always enjoy your amazing poetry. Congratulations on having this honored for POTD! Have a great weekend! xxoo
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/9/2020 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Connie. You have a good weekend too.
Date: 5/6/2020 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Rob! This is wonderful I greatly appreciate you watching my back. What a wonderful poem! Thanks my friend.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/6/2020 6:06:00 PM
You are welcome Mark and welcome back.
Date: 5/6/2020 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/6/2020 6:06:00 PM
TY Kim.
Date: 5/6/2020 4:58:00 AM
Awesome tribute to a great friend and poet. Congrats on POTD, Rob. Stay well!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/6/2020 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Charles. You stay well too.
Date: 5/5/2020 10:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I have written about friends. A great friend is the best. Enjoy your day and your win.......
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/6/2020 12:41:00 AM
Nothing like a struggle to help bond a friendship. TY Paula and God Bless You.
Date: 5/4/2020 10:00:00 PM
Rob, contratulations on your POTD - strong and powerful.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/5/2020 10:19:00 PM
My thanks Sam.
Date: 5/4/2020 8:13:00 AM
Vain but beautified...would end up breaking the mirror...Congratulations Rob on POTD...
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2020 11:38:00 AM
Thank You Arturo.
Date: 5/4/2020 7:23:00 AM
I congratulate you for POTD Rob, and applaud you whole heatedly for this piece. xomo
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2020 11:38:00 AM
TY for reading and commenting Maureen.
Date: 5/4/2020 7:19:00 AM
Rob, your honoring of Mark's stance is one I admire. He always stands on the side of what is right, and so do you. I'd like to give each of you a white hat to proudly wear. You're both heroes to me. 2 big hugs
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2020 11:38:00 AM
Thank You Lin. Hugs back to you. I am glad we have become friends.
Date: 5/4/2020 6:36:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2020 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Have to cube the hugs this time.
Date: 5/4/2020 2:32:00 AM
What a glowing tribute to Mark, yes I fully agree with your discription of him Rob And a well deserved POTD honour for you. Tom
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2020 11:35:00 AM
TY very much Tom.
Date: 5/3/2020 5:30:00 PM
Words of truth always exude greatest power my friend. Those that sacrifice to help others so often take poison arrows for their brave and honorable efforts. Such is part of the venom that evil and darkness spews. I hope that this gets awarded POTW. A fav.. God bless...
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2020 11:35:00 AM
Robert, thank you. I feel honored and blessed to have become your friend.
Date: 5/3/2020 2:56:00 AM
A lovely tribute to Mark, he has the guts to speak out a man of integrity just like Teppo who I miss so much :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2020 6:37:00 AM
oh brilliant thanks so much Tom I am relieved I'd mailed and not heard anything back:-) hugs jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/4/2020 2:34:00 AM
Jan, Bobby May was on just over a week ago, said he was busy but would be back.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/3/2020 12:49:00 PM
YW concerning the donation. I am glad to hear that the newspaper helped out with a front page feature. I hope all is well with Bobby May. Hugs squared.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2020 12:30:00 PM
Yeah they did a newspaper front page on his achievements so I expect the total to rise and thanks again for donating so generously. I miss Lin, miss TJ miss so many who are no longer active or have left the site. am concerned about Bobby May i've mailed him and no contact or poems since January:-( hugs jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/3/2020 11:56:00 AM
Teppo and Lin too. We have lost so many over the years. I see Bob is now over 20K.

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