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Despondent Soil

DESPONDENT SOIL red soil, in a hell hole, it was shoveled, and the hued cones, see the borders, i am waist-deep, in the sewer, and by waste-deep, i am troubled, in a cesspool, of woe 3/10/2017 Rob Carmack’s Lyrics III contest *waist and waste - spelled 2 ways for effect. *Inspired by both the contest song and my neighbor’s calamity

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Date: 3/10/2017 1:41:00 PM
The emotions of sadness and worry are very strong in this poem Kim. Well expressed. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2017 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 3/10/2017 12:50:00 PM
heart-breaking write superbly expressed, kim...winning wishes and huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2017 3:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette!

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