Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Despondent Soil

DESPONDENT SOIL

red soil, in a

hell hole, it was

shoveled, and the 

hued cones, see the

borders, i am

waist-deep, in the

sewer, and by

waste-deep, i am

troubled, in a

cesspool, of woe


3/10/2017

Rob Carmack’s Lyrics III contest

*waist and waste -  spelled 2 ways for effect.
*Inspired by both the contest song and my neighbor’s calamity

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Chris Green March 10, 2017 at 1:41 PM The emotions of sadness and worry are very strong in this poem Kim. Well expressed. Good luck in the contest. Kim Rodrigues March 10, 2017 at 3:46 PM Thank you, Chris!

Nette Onclaud March 10, 2017 at 12:50 PM heart-breaking write superbly expressed, kim...winning wishes and huggs Kim Rodrigues March 10, 2017 at 3:46 PM Thanks so much, Nette!