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Find Me

                    Find me
	    in the 	        sea full 
	of empty 	        shells.
	They are 	        bones over 
   Noah’s 			         burnt vessel,
    ashes 			         of gopher, 
Calvary’s 			         wood the
	 timeless 	        ark and 
	rungs on 	        Jacob’s ladder.
      Moor your 	        might to 
	my truth 	        and blink 	
	your eye.	        Before 		
	  you are 	        adrift 
	in Luke’s 	        gulf, 
		     find me.

Copyright © Rob Carmack | Year Posted 2017

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Kai Michael Neumann Date: 2/12/2020 4:53:00 AM That is very good. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 2/12/2020 10:29:00 AM TY Kai.

Juliet Ligon Date: 4/26/2018 3:07:00 PM Inspiring! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 4/26/2018 9:18:00 PM I like how it turned out, TY and God Bless you Juliet.

Funom Makama Date: 6/30/2017 8:48:00 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/30/2017 12:43:00 PM Thank you Funom, God Bless you.

Funom Makama Date: 6/30/2017 8:47:00 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/31/2017 12:06:00 AM This moved me Rob! Brilliant use of the shape form!!! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 6/30/2017 12:43:00 PM TY Richard & God Bless.

Doug Vinson Date: 3/9/2017 9:17:00 AM Well done, Rob! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/13/2017 12:07:00 AM TY & God Bless you Doug.

Maria Williams Date: 3/8/2017 7:51:00 PM A sign of the Cross, accompanied with beautiful words. Congrats Rob Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/13/2017 12:08:00 AM Thanks Maria.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/4/2017 6:36:00 PM Love this! Congrats, Rob! Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/7/2017 7:35:00 AM TY, God Bless You Kim.

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/4/2017 5:36:00 AM Beautiful Rob. It speaks to me, though I am not on 'terra firma' with the bible. It reads very well with and without the references. Congratulations, Kai Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/7/2017 7:35:00 AM Thank you Kai, I appreciate you taking the time to read & comment.

Laura Leiser Date: 3/3/2017 9:57:00 PM This is so beautiful, Rob! I enjoyed the verses, too! Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/4/2017 1:54:00 AM Thanks Laura.

James Inman Date: 3/3/2017 9:32:00 PM Wonderful Rob. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/4/2017 1:54:00 AM TY James.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/3/2017 6:36:00 PM wow, Rob, I must not have visited your page for at least two weeks or I would have seen this new post of yours. It is simply outstanding Congrats for your GREAT work. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/4/2017 1:53:00 AM Thank you my friend.

Agnes Krampe Date: 3/3/2017 4:17:00 PM Congrats on your win. I love the images and the biblical references. Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/4/2017 1:53:00 AM Thank you Agnes.

Eve Roper Date: 3/3/2017 3:26:00 PM Wow love the shape... and the inspirational message :) congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/4/2017 1:53:00 AM Thank you blessed Eve.

Charlie Smith Date: 2/28/2017 10:13:00 PM Peace be with you Rob.. A most spiritual experience, best wishes... Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 3/3/2017 1:51:00 AM And with you also Charlie. Thank you for reading and for the comment.

CayCay Jennings Date: 2/19/2017 8:31:00 PM Very good job, Rob. I enjoyed your cross of deep words. All the best ... CayCay Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 2/20/2017 2:05:00 AM Thank you CayCay.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2017 2:06:00 AM - A great shaped cross surrounded by your beautiful words, Rob - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 2/20/2017 2:06:00 AM Thanks Anne-Lise - surrounding you with a hug.

Charlie Smith Date: 2/16/2017 11:58:00 PM Keep close you faith, and peace be with you... Login to Reply Rob Carmack Date: 2/20/2017 2:07:00 AM Some say faith infused, sure feels that way. Thanks for reading and commenting Charlie.