Rob Carmack Poet Shape

Find Me

                    Find me
	    in the 	        sea full 
	of empty 	        shells.
	They are 	        bones over 
   Noah’s 			         burnt vessel,
    ashes 			         of gopher, 
Calvary’s 			         wood the
	 timeless 	        ark and 
	rungs on 	        Jacob’s ladder.
      Moor your 	        might to 
	my truth 	        and blink 	
	your eye.	        Before 		
	  you are 	        adrift 
	in Luke’s 	        gulf, 
		     find me.

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Kai Michael Neumann February 12, 2020 at 4:53 AM That is very good. Rob Carmack February 12, 2020 at 10:29 AM TY Kai.

Juliet Ligon April 26, 2018 at 3:07 PM Inspiring! Rob Carmack April 26, 2018 at 9:18 PM I like how it turned out, TY and God Bless you Juliet.

Funom Makama June 30, 2017 at 8:48 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share. Rob Carmack June 30, 2017 at 12:43 PM Thank you Funom, God Bless you.

Funom Makama June 30, 2017 at 8:47 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2017 at 12:06 AM This moved me Rob! Brilliant use of the shape form!!! Rob Carmack June 30, 2017 at 12:43 PM TY Richard & God Bless.

Doug Vinson March 9, 2017 at 9:17 AM Well done, Rob! Rob Carmack March 13, 2017 at 12:07 AM TY & God Bless you Doug.

Maria Williams March 8, 2017 at 7:51 PM A sign of the Cross, accompanied with beautiful words. Congrats Rob Rob Carmack March 13, 2017 at 12:08 AM Thanks Maria.

Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2017 at 6:36 PM Love this! Congrats, Rob! Rob Carmack March 7, 2017 at 7:35 AM TY, God Bless You Kim.

Kai Michael Neumann March 4, 2017 at 5:36 AM Beautiful Rob. It speaks to me, though I am not on 'terra firma' with the bible. It reads very well with and without the references. Congratulations, Kai Rob Carmack March 7, 2017 at 7:35 AM Thank you Kai, I appreciate you taking the time to read & comment.

Laura Leiser March 3, 2017 at 9:57 PM This is so beautiful, Rob! I enjoyed the verses, too! Congrats on your win :) Rob Carmack March 4, 2017 at 1:54 AM Thanks Laura.

James Inman March 3, 2017 at 9:32 PM Wonderful Rob. Rob Carmack March 4, 2017 at 1:54 AM TY James.

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2017 at 6:36 PM wow, Rob, I must not have visited your page for at least two weeks or I would have seen this new post of yours. It is simply outstanding Congrats for your GREAT work. Rob Carmack March 4, 2017 at 1:53 AM Thank you my friend.

Agnes Krampe March 3, 2017 at 4:17 PM Congrats on your win. I love the images and the biblical references. Rob Carmack March 4, 2017 at 1:53 AM Thank you Agnes.

Eve Roper March 3, 2017 at 3:26 PM Wow love the shape... and the inspirational message :) congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Rob Carmack March 4, 2017 at 1:53 AM Thank you blessed Eve.

Charlie Smith February 28, 2017 at 10:13 PM Peace be with you Rob.. A most spiritual experience, best wishes... Rob Carmack March 3, 2017 at 1:51 AM And with you also Charlie. Thank you for reading and for the comment.

CayCay Godwin February 19, 2017 at 8:31 PM Very good job, Rob. I enjoyed your cross of deep words. All the best ... CayCay Rob Carmack February 20, 2017 at 2:05 AM Thank you CayCay.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2017 at 2:06 AM - A great shaped cross surrounded by your beautiful words, Rob - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Rob Carmack February 20, 2017 at 2:06 AM Thanks Anne-Lise - surrounding you with a hug.

Charlie Smith February 16, 2017 at 11:58 PM Keep close you faith, and peace be with you... Rob Carmack February 20, 2017 at 2:07 AM Some say faith infused, sure feels that way. Thanks for reading and commenting Charlie.