Find Me

Find me in the sea full of empty shells. They are bones over Noah’s burnt vessel, ashes of gopher, Calvary’s wood the timeless ark and rungs on Jacob’s ladder. Moor your might to my truth and blink your eye. Before you are adrift in Luke’s gulf, find me.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/12/2020 4:53:00 AM

That is very good.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/12/2020 10:29:00 AM

TY Kai.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/26/2018 3:07:00 PM

Inspiring!

Rob Carmack
Date: 4/26/2018 9:18:00 PM

I like how it turned out, TY and God Bless you Juliet.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 8:48:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/30/2017 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Funom, God Bless you.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 8:47:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/31/2017 12:06:00 AM

This moved me Rob! Brilliant use of the shape form!!!

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/30/2017 12:43:00 PM

TY Richard & God Bless.

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/9/2017 9:17:00 AM

Well done, Rob!

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/13/2017 12:07:00 AM

TY & God Bless you Doug.

Maria Williams

Date: 3/8/2017 7:51:00 PM

A sign of the Cross, accompanied with beautiful words. Congrats Rob

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/13/2017 12:08:00 AM

Thanks Maria.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/4/2017 6:36:00 PM

Love this! Congrats, Rob!

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/7/2017 7:35:00 AM

TY, God Bless You Kim.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/4/2017 5:36:00 AM

Beautiful Rob. It speaks to me, though I am not on 'terra firma' with the bible. It reads very well with and without the references. Congratulations, Kai

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/7/2017 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Kai, I appreciate you taking the time to read & comment.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/3/2017 9:57:00 PM

This is so beautiful, Rob! I enjoyed the verses, too! Congrats on your win :)

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/4/2017 1:54:00 AM

Thanks Laura.

James Inman

Date: 3/3/2017 9:32:00 PM

Wonderful Rob.

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/4/2017 1:54:00 AM

TY James.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2017 6:36:00 PM

wow, Rob, I must not have visited your page for at least two weeks or I would have seen this new post of yours. It is simply outstanding Congrats for your GREAT work.

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/4/2017 1:53:00 AM

Thank you my friend.