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Mauna Kea (White Mountain) is 13,760 ft, on the 'Big Island' of Hawaii where 202,000 islanders reside. On the windward/eastern side, is the county seat and its largest town of Hilo (to bond)--pronounced, HE-low, home to 43,000. It is my birthplace and where I now call home--once again--after a 40-year absence.

Aloha!

Rural life on the island of Hawaii, I held an interest in poetry since my shortened year in high school--having graduated at a young age. 'The Collection Plate', was my first published work in 1977 by a major national magazine. That opened the door for others to appear in several published anthologies throughout my early career.

My family grew up on the mainland. Kenny, Ricky, the twins Liz and Franky (who had passed 01/14/2022 at 35 years old), Princess, Rose, and Kimo, twelve grandkids, and three great-grandsons. I met my significant other of 25 years, Elyse, of Spanish and Swedish descent from Seville, Spain, on my 17th birthday. We both attended the University, being four years my senior. Sadly, she died shortly after Kimo was born.

I retired after 48 years and successfully sold online for a few years while passively engaging a writer's aspirations.


Strict Haiku UPDATE

Blog Posted:1/31/2020 5:35:00 PM

At this point, there are 8 entries that need to read the posted rules, SO, if your poem does not state "Poem has been read", you are one of the 8 that needs to edit REMEMBER NO HUMAN REFERENCING, it is all about nature  -- Thank You



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Date: 2/2/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you , William, for the post it helps a lot.
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Date: 2/1/2020 2:42:00 PM
Should anyone want "Poem has been read" removed and "Remove From Contest" be reinstated -- just soup mail me
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Date: 2/1/2020 2:30:00 PM
gosh, how do you know all that stuff? I never noticed all those things before. I just see "poem has been read" so I assume I am in the clear. thanks for pointing out that we can see that!!!
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Date: 2/1/2020 2:39:00 PM
Usually, poems I've read and marked as such would go to the winner's circle, prior to closing the contest, I will review those I've left as is and if they did apply themselves they'll go to the winner's circle or not
Date: 1/31/2020 10:42:00 PM
The entrant will click on the green "Enter Contest", whereto, they will be directed to opt either "Edit Poem" or "Remove From Contest" highlighted in blue, however, "Poem has been read" will appear in black replacing "Remove From Contest", "Edit Poem" will still remain in highlighted blue.
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Date: 1/31/2020 10:09:00 PM
I don't enter haiku 5/7/5 contests because I disagree with the requirement but if I did or those that did, I'm not aware that an entrant can see whether or not a contest entry has been read or not
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Date: 1/31/2020 10:31:00 PM
The entrant will click on the green "Enter Contest", whereto, they will be directed to opt either "Edit Poem" or "Remove From Contest" highlighted in blue, however, "Poem has been read" will appear in black replacing "Remove From Contest", "Edit Poem" will still remain in highlighted blue.

My Past Blog Posts

 
Medicare Virtual Agents
Date Posted: 6/14/2024 10:33:00 PM
Metrical Winners Distribution UPDATE
Date Posted: 1/8/2024 8:24:00 PM
Metrical Tale Contest FINALIZED
Date Posted: 1/4/2024 11:23:00 AM
Aloha, Soopers update
Date Posted: 5/5/2023 10:27:00 AM
2023 Strongest Earthquake Jolts my Home, Affecting more than Half of my Island's 200k+ Souls
Date Posted: 2/15/2023 3:40:00 AM
Metrical Tale On a Temporal Hiatus
Date Posted: 1/26/2023 9:02:00 AM
UPDATE: Metrical Tale Cash/Premiere Lifetime Membership Contest
Date Posted: 1/9/2023 10:48:00 AM
2023 Big Bang Realized 'Metrical Tale' Cash Contest
Date Posted: 1/4/2023 3:08:00 PM
MonoMixoRhyme FINALIZED & NOTICE POSTED
Date Posted: 11/30/2022 10:15:00 PM
Dot Your i's and Cross Your t's ALERT
Date Posted: 10/7/2022 9:15:00 PM
Dot Your i's and Cross Your t's FINALIZED
Date Posted: 9/30/2022 10:05:00 AM
Pray for my son Keola's Family who now walks with Grace
Date Posted: 1/14/2022 11:15:00 AM
Sonnet Salutation Finalized
Date Posted: 12/29/2021 8:56:00 PM
Heptastich Finalized
Date Posted: 6/8/2021 10:41:00 PM
Heptastich Update
Date Posted: 6/1/2021 8:11:00 PM
Update: Lay November Contest
Date Posted: 10/24/2020 5:30:00 PM
Strict Haiku UPDATE
Date Posted: 1/31/2020 5:35:00 PM
Because It's A Tuesday 140 - 140 Sonnet CASH Payout
Date Posted: 10/4/2019 9:41:00 PM
Because It's A Tuesday 140 - 140 Sonnet Poetry Contest
Date Posted: 9/24/2019 8:36:00 PM
MY UPCOMING BIRTHDAY (09-03) ***Cash Payout
Date Posted: 9/20/2019 1:23:00 PM
Songs of Sonnets: The Tale of Prince Zag The Freid (Short Story)
Date Posted: 9/17/2019 6:34:00 AM
Sacred Sword Of The Chrysanthemum Throne (Short Story)
Date Posted: 9/14/2019 3:07:00 AM
A HAWAIIAN FOLKLORE - EVENT ON THE ISLAND OF HAWAII - Part 6
Date Posted: 8/31/2019 6:52:00 PM
A HAWAIIAN FOLKLORE - EVENT ON THE ISLAND OF HAWAII - Part 5
Date Posted: 8/31/2019 4:16:00 PM
A HAWAIIAN FOLKLORE - EVENT ON THE ISLAND OF HAWAII - Part 4
Date Posted: 8/31/2019 8:28:00 AM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
7/26/2024 Eggy Edgy Rhymechildren,fun,nursery rhym
7/25/2024 Refining consciousness Dramatic Monologueappreciation,friendship,
7/25/2024 The Road Not Taken: Per My Written Short Story Rhymeanalogy,parody,perspectiv
7/25/2024 Can-be Beach, Fourth of July Limerickanalogy,beach,holiday,
7/25/2024 Daystar Acrosticanalogy,change,happiness,
7/25/2024 life of the christ child Sedokaangel,bible,growing up,je
7/24/2024 Place On Earth God Named--and You're Wrong Parallelismus Membrorumanalogy,bible,identity,
7/24/2024 Mirage: Tapestry of the Sand Free verseanalogy,appreciation,
7/24/2024 The Difference Between War and Peace Verseanalogy,peace,war,
7/24/2024 The Red Dirt Devil Blank verseanalogy,
7/24/2024 Aphrodite Greek Goddess RESURRECTED Verseappreciation,beautiful,in
7/22/2024 Kamala - 2024 - Trump Juejuamerica,analogy,beautiful
7/22/2024 I miss Sedokabrother,death,family,fath
7/21/2024 Abracadabra Day Rhymelife,nature,people,perspe
7/21/2024 A Fell Star Three Bags Full Rhymeage,animal,irony,memory,n
7/20/2024 the ado of nature Haikuanalogy,nature,
7/20/2024 contest change happy birthday Sedokaanalogy,
7/20/2024 Engagements Rhymebeautiful,future,life,
7/20/2024 Plus Preposition: Per Resolve Tankaanalogy,
7/19/2024 a spin Senryudeath,life,perspective,
7/18/2024 Lenin: The Corners That Circled Life Free verseanalogy,
7/18/2024 The Magic of Worthwhile Rhymecharacter,confusion,fun,h
7/18/2024 stage fright Senryuanalogy,
7/17/2024 Whiles Of Yesterday Tankaheaven,integrity,life,lig
7/17/2024 Hesitancy Define First Step Divine Villanelleanalogy,faith,heaven,hope
7/16/2024 Mary Had A Little Lamb Alexandrineanalogy,nursery rhyme,
7/16/2024 Trending On PoetrySoup Alexandrineanalogy,
7/16/2024 The NV of Poetry Alexandrineanalogy,imagery,
7/15/2024 William Charles Lunalilo Clerihewappreciation,
7/15/2024 When Summer Is Gone Free verseappreciation,summer,
7/15/2024 eye openers Haikuappreciation,imagery,pers
7/14/2024 23rd Psalms: Path to Righteousness Parallelismus Membrorumbible,death,faith,family,
7/14/2024 A Private Invitation To He-- Narrativeallusion,analogy,games,im
7/14/2024 Farewell Poetry Soup Elegyanalogy,creation,death of
7/14/2024 Forget-Me-Not: 1-line NEEDED: 7-22-24 pm Elegydeath,death of a friend,
7/13/2024 Times Acrosticanalogy,appreciation,
7/13/2024 Nadir Rhymeanxiety,betrayal,characte
7/12/2024 Born In Original Sin ie: BIOs Dramatic Monologueanalogy,appreciation,
7/11/2024 Fraternity Verseanalogy,appreciation,
7/11/2024 Eternity Verseanalogy,appreciation,
7/11/2024 Aphorism Plus: Coconut Grove Nightclub Fire Lyricdance,death,night,
7/11/2024 It's Raining, It's Pouring Man--REMAKE Lyricappreciation,music,song,
7/10/2024 Aphorism Plus: Quote by Benjamin Franklin Rhymeanalogy,appreciation,
7/10/2024 Sea Glass Rhymeanalogy,
7/10/2024 s w e e t Tankaanalogy,
7/9/2024 We Go 2 War by Glenn Hughes: Revised Dramatic Monologuewar,
7/8/2024 Beginnings Rhymeanalogy,baby,imagery,life
7/7/2024 an act called cetacean stranding Suzette Primeanalogy,
7/6/2024 Sea Glass: Illumination Didacticfaith,fate,
7/6/2024 A Heart to Hearth Narrativeheart,humorous,
7/6/2024 Where are we going Sonnetanalogy,destiny,faith,gam
7/6/2024 Errs From My Windows Narrativeappreciation,beautiful,gi
7/5/2024 Not Quite Picture Perfect Haibunanalogy,appreciation,imag
7/4/2024 a scene in their eyes Tankaappreciation,family,farew
7/1/2024 The Beggar and Lil C Dramatic Verseappreciation,mental illne
6/30/2024 A Lost Brother's Wish for a Brother Loss Versebrother,
6/29/2024 Mini-Couplet Couplet:The Tails of Two Kitties Coupletangst,anxiety,betrayal,ch
6/28/2024 Bananas Wagged His Name Bioanimal,change,culture,dea
6/27/2024 Art Tautogramanalogy,
6/26/2024 Poeticism Admired Sonnetappreciation,imagery,in m
6/26/2024 A Candle Lit On Both Ends Acrosticappreciation,bible,faith,
6/24/2024 Business 101: 'art' of trade Senryufate,inspiration,integrit
6/24/2024 Gemini Garden, Silent One Lyricappreciation,
6/23/2024 Tautogram: Number 01 Tautogramanalogy,
6/22/2024 Sartorial Self Portrait Sonnetanalogy,
6/22/2024 wow Senryuanalogy,
6/22/2024 The Word of God: In Mom's Desk Top Drawer Sonnetanalogy,
6/21/2024 Hub Bub Homonyms Verseanalogy,
6/21/2024 I Want To Make This Perfectly Clear: Contrast Contest Carpe Diemanalogy,
6/18/2024 Two Bros Find A Road Dramatic Versememory,remember,
6/17/2024 It Is Not Your Time Quatrainrecovery from,
6/16/2024 It's Open Season Sapphic stanzaautumn,lost,spring,summer
6/15/2024 I Survived '75 Dramatic Verse9th grade,angel,boy,frien
6/15/2024 Children of a Different Sun Rhymeappreciation,beautiful,bi
6/14/2024 Enigma Suzette Primeallusion,
6/12/2024 Captain Gilgamesh Aloysius Willikers Dramatic Versegod,life,people,
6/12/2024 The Scriptureless Time of Christ II Narrativebeautiful,education,image
6/11/2024 Dementia: Collaboration of Brain Disseminations Carpe Diemabsence,age,anxiety,emoti
6/11/2024 Maps a Buck: Free of Lugs Lyricappreciation,humorous,lif
6/10/2024 The Vote of Sacrifice Rhymeamerica,bible,children,co
6/10/2024 The Empty Nest Suzette Primedestiny,divorce,forgivene
6/7/2024 The Scriptureless Time of Christ I Narrativebeautiful,imagery,jesus,
6/6/2024 Murder On The Orient Expressed Lentochild abuse,death,family,
6/6/2024 Haiku: Little Songs of Nature Sonnetappreciation,beautiful,bi
6/6/2024 Writer's Block Chokaconfidence,how i feel,ima
6/5/2024 Cheery Bird Ethereebird,cheer up,
6/5/2024 The Empty Room Blank verseallusion,analogy,imagery,
6/4/2024 You're Always On My Mind Lyricamerica,appreciation,feel
6/4/2024 Waker-Upper Quatrainappreciation,imagery,life
6/4/2024 Too Close To The Edge Quatraincareer,celebration,charac
6/2/2024 Putin, Xi, and Damocles: Three or more than Sonnetchange,character,fate,lea
6/2/2024 Star Symposium Sonnetplanet,stars,sun,
6/2/2024 C- A-ll I-N -Earth's Firstborn-Murderer Carpe Diemanimal,brother,garden,jea
5/30/2024 Prince's Adoptees Balladeabuse,bullying,corruption
5/28/2024 int'l poetry soup kitchens Chokaanalogy,
5/28/2024 The Unknown Soldier Tribute Lyricappreciation,death,memori
5/27/2024 Nova wears Heaven's crown Haibunabuse,best friend,cat,dea
5/26/2024 Requiem For A Motherless Child Free verseappreciation,black africa
5/26/2024 Palindrome: Dumb-old-dork of Exports Limerickconfusion,father,friend,h
5/25/2024 I'm Just Out For A Bit Rhymeappreciation,death of a f

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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
A Fragile Self Free verseintrospection,self,
The Butterfly Nebula Rhymebeauty,nature,sky,stars,
Lily of the Valley Trioletflower,nature,spring,
We Are Wolves Free verseanimal,appreciation,dog,e
Land of Lights Sonnetbeauty,nature,
Poetry and Me Acrosticme,poetry,writing,
Moving On Verselove,
primeval - Rhymeappreciation,beauty,natur
Broken Wings of War Free versewar,
When You Booze Narrativeabuse,culture,drink,loss,
Either Or I do not know?muse,
Maui Sunrise Romanticismbeautiful,love,nature,rel
These Arms Long To Hold You Enclosed Rhymelove,marriage,
Agapanthus Rhymeblue,flower,garden,poetry
Oceana Free verse10th grade,11th grade,12t
Carnforth Rhymeengland,feelings,film,nos
And We Call It Free verserain,weather,
Musings of An Aging Man Free verseage,introspection,life,tr
Memories of Melodies Rhymemarriage,passion,
Rebirth Free versedark,life,light,morning,n
Petrichor and Vellichor Free verseart,
Edges Haiku10th grade,11th grade,bea
Say You Will Verselove,romantic,
The Night Had Gone Awry Enclosed Rhymenight,woman,
Goddess of the Night Personificationfantasy,nature,
She Will Rise Enclosed Rhymeanalogy,inspiration,journ
That Starry Night Ekphrasisart,depression,night,pass
He Is Flawed Rispetto10th grade,9th grade,beau
All In a Day At the Louvre Free verseart,paris,travel,
Phantasmagoria Trioletconfusion,imagination,
To Fly Away a Butterfly Free versegrief,
The Woman They Know Free verseanalogy,courage,hope,wome
October Skies Lyricage,anniversary,autumn,gr
An Autumn Walk Free verseautumn,
Season of Splendor Sonnetspring,
Forlorn Hope Free versehope,
Winsome Wisteria Sonnet Sonnetbeautiful,beauty,flower,s
A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory Rhymebird,sky,song,sun,
Zephyr's Silky Tendrils Verseromance,sweet love,wind,
Underdogs Versepeople,perspective,
A Road Less Traveled By Us Free verseamerica,beautiful,nature,
Slaughtered Memory Free versefreedom,
Depth Perception Rhymeperspective,
Mimosa Sunrise Versebeauty,flower,morning,nat
One Tear Layangst,depression,fear,sad
Part Time Poet Rhymeangst,conflict,inspiratio
All In a Day Sonnetappreciation,hope,morning
Zapped - Ap Abecedariancat,
Unsure the Shore Sonnet8th grade,beach,bereaveme
Black Velvet's Rumble Box Haikucat,
hope, hushed - Sapphic stanzabeauty,flower,longing,lov
After It Rained Free versebeauty,environment,rain,
The Smile In Your Eyes Sonnetlove,
Dragon's Tooth Sapphic stanzafantasy,
Wooing Winter In Autumn's Song Layimagery,winter,
The Wealth of Spring Abecedariandaffodils,spring,
A Beauteous Day of Spring Rhymenature,spring,
It Came Upon a Prophecy Lyricchristian,christmas,jesus
A Poets Abode Sonnetart,beauty,passion,poetry
Terra Incognita Rhyme12th grade,america,creati
Extinguished Names Free verseallegory,allusion,
Ships Sail Roundelage,life,
Emily Free verseappreciation,poems,poetes
A Tree Is Like a Blank Book Enclosed Rhymechange,nature,simile,
Like a Book Free versebooks,love,sensual,simile
Listless As a Lazy River Rhymesad,
Sonnet On Mine Own Visiteth To the Future Sonnetpoets,
Like a Lioness Stalking Rhymebird,cat,
November Stars Free versehope,longing,sky,
As Fresh As a Daisy Free verseanalogy,beauty,flower,sim
From Dusk To Dawn Sonnetbeautiful,beauty,dark,ima
Like Violins In a Marching Band Free versepolitical,
Navigating Through Life's Highway Dramatic Monologuefun,house,humor,life,trav
The Shape of Time Monokuallusion,life,time,
Fall of the Willow's Leaf Rhymeangst,autumn,conflict,fat
Musings On Faith Free versegospel,heaven,imagination
When Autumn Comes Quaternautumn,
Autumn - a Citrine Leaf Quaternautumn,dance,death,flying
Magnificent Blue Ocean Personificationocean,
Broken Free versebird,emotions,fate,intros
Narrow Margin Dramatic Verseanalogy,how i feel,life,
STRADIVARIUS Free versemusic,
When Snow Fell On Waikiki Free versefantasy,seasons,winter,
Tearful Epicappreciation,love,
Autumn Delights - Constanza Rhymeautumn,emotions,imagery,
A Time to Reflect Rhymeintrospection,life,memory
The Vanity of Pleasure Rhymedesire,happiness,vanity,
Defuse and Compromise Rhymeconflict,fate,feelings,lo
Quest of Allure Romantic Verseromantic,sensual,
gifting more than gold Senryuage,life,love,seasons,
Never Smile at a Crocodile Senryuriver,
Falls Magical Splendor Sonnetautumn,change,color,life,
Day Full of Snow Quaternautumn,snow,winter,
The Creative Type Sonnetart,creation,people,poete
A Fine New Day Alliterationlove,
Entertainer-Anacreontic Couplets Coupletdance,desire,
Hazardous Hooves Free verseanalogy,angst,bereavement
Soul of Seaside Sepulchre Free verseangst,betrayal,dark,deep,
Desperate Hope Rhymehope,inspiration,love,
The Shape of Dark - A Murder of Crows Free verseangst,animal,death,desire

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Kim Rodrigues United States Flag United States Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Tom Cunningham United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Line Gauthier Canada Flag Canada Read
Quoth Theraven United States Flag United States Read
Vijay Pandit United States Flag United States Read
Dale Gregory Cozart United States Flag United States Read
Ann Foster United States Flag United States Read
Lonna Blodgett United States Flag United States Read
Brenda Chiri United States Flag United States Read
Edward Ibeh United States Flag United States Read
Suzette Richards South Africa Flag South Africa Read
Sotto Poet United States Flag United States Read
Alok Yadav India Flag India Read
Linda Alice Fowler United States Flag United States Read
Lennon Hammett United States Flag United States Read
R J. Elless United States Flag United States Read
Martin Braun United States Flag United States Read
Lycia Harding United States Flag United States Read
Sandra Adams United States Flag United States Read
Hiya Sharma India Flag India Read
Paige Hind United States Flag United States Read
Djeli Forchion United States Flag United States Read
Sara Etgen-Baker United States Flag United States Read
Hilo Poet United States Flag United States Read
Ink Empress Maldives Flag Maldives Read
Carlene Juju The Dragon Trinidad and Tobago Flag Trinidad and Tobago Read
MB Farookh India Flag India Read
Daniel Henry Rodgers United States Flag United States Read
Mark Massey United States Flag United States Read
Jay Narain United States Flag United States Read
Triny Xiang United States Flag United States Read
Benjamin Bartley United States Flag United States Read
Victor Buhagiar Malta Flag Malta Read

Book: Reflection on the Important Things