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Couplet   ---   2024 December 26

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New Years Old Wishes

Old lies remote, yet they find a way
Though it does not shine like New Year's day
It wakes hope to raise it to the top
Ask past and present for them to swap
It's the age that will soften their hearts
Heaven's eyes will see, and Grace imparts
Angels sing a suite composed by Bach
As that day nears, boost time on a clock
Old ask politely, excuse me dear
New says certainly, it's nice and clear
As an old wish sits on top, tick tock
Feebly ask, add more years please, Good Luck.
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Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 12:40 PM
- Love how you start this poem, Hilo ... a creative poem, for this contest... best wishes (my entry got a bit boring after reading yours) - Happy New Year :) - hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 1:53 PM
Untrue, as I'm glad to see both our names or just yours when I don't make the cut, which is fine with me. Mahalo, for your kind words of encouragements~William
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