Rhyme --- 2025 January 12
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If age is a constant then daydreams and nightmares will cease to exist when the best of life is achieved as maturity stabilizes at a level of immaturity favors the innocence in confidence-mired ill-retrieved those hopelessly enwrapped by rhetorical triggers stemmed by the proposer amongst the ill-believed 'tis liken a heist at gunpoint to corner those regretters to have brains (methinks) to cusps their mind deceived and churned their souls to enter their relievers and entertain the premature notion that they conceived participants to ascertain the wherewithal of achievers better or best consciously the line of inquiry perceived to mull over and enter the zone as one of the leavers to post with the best, to the winners be my best-wished.
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