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The Fallen

She rests beneath her willow’s weeping rain, As autumn strips them bare behind its theft; Of slender leaves and tears, they stand bereft, Yet sorrow, like the wind, begins to wane. For all that falls to earth won't fall in vain, And what escapes our sight has not yet left; Though heavy hearts must carry now this heft, It's how we know what’s lost to still remain. And from the tears, the grieving willow weeps, Its twigs and leaves descend to softened ground, Reclaimed by earth and soil from which they grew. For all that's ever buried merely sleeps, And what we mourn as lost again is found, When spring returns, and life begins anew.

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Date: 11/13/2024 2:33:00 PM
A masterfully constructed sonnet. Well done and worthy of all its kudos. I very much enjoyed reading it, then reading it again. Thank you.
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Date: 10/19/2024 12:28:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem! Well written!
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Date: 10/15/2024 4:03:00 PM
Art truly worthy of its' apex positioning. I gave it a second reading like you would a second piece of Mom's pie. Mmmm...Delicious. Keep falling please. Many want to catch what comes next. With respect, Gilles
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/16/2024 8:16:00 PM
Gilles, thank you so much! Your kind and encouraging words have truly made my day! Xo
Date: 10/15/2024 8:15:00 AM
Wow. Congrats on POTD. Well deserved!
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/16/2024 8:14:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much! Xo
Date: 10/9/2024 6:29:00 PM
Lovely poetry Jessica, autumn in the fall is the most splendrous time of all… Beryl
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/16/2024 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Beryl!
Date: 9/29/2024 6:18:00 AM
Love the imagery in this poem. Beautiful
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/29/2024 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, George! Xo
Date: 9/29/2024 6:01:00 AM
I love this poem. Beautifully deep. I love the last three lines most of all.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/29/2024 6:38:00 AM
I'm honored, Ryan; thank you! Xo
Date: 9/23/2024 3:23:00 PM
Truly an exceptional piece well constructed and presented. Great job.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/27/2024 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, John. That means a lot! Xo
Date: 9/20/2024 9:20:00 AM
A very deep, thoughtful and touching sonnet. You are full of talent!
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/20/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much! Truly means a lot.
Date: 9/19/2024 2:27:00 PM
Wonderful Imagery, I loved it..//Blessings
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/20/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much! Xoxo
Date: 9/16/2024 4:39:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/20/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, John!
Date: 9/16/2024 1:14:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet and a well deserved win, congratulations
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/16/2024 6:51:00 AM
Terry, thank you so much! Xo
Date: 9/15/2024 9:37:00 PM
Dear Jess, I’m delighted to return with my congratulations for your success in Craig’s contest. A wonderful win, a worthy first place finish. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/15/2024 5:09:00 PM
A potd and a win. This is your month Jessica
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/16/2024 6:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Tom! Xo
Date: 9/5/2024 7:24:00 AM
A gorgeous summary, Jessica. Very inspiring and the crux of your piece, The Fallen. I like your choice of the willow as representative tree - it provides some very good metaphors. Well-done.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 9/8/2024 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much! Truly appreciated! Xo
Date: 8/27/2024 5:32:00 PM
Cycles within cycles, Jessica. A delight. And POTD to boot!:o))
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much! Xoxo
Date: 8/27/2024 5:30:00 PM
Dear Jessica, this is beautiful, tender and emotional; all at the same time. The entire poem is moving, but this thought curls gently around me: ' For all that falls to earth won't fall in vain. ' So very true ! ! Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:51:00 PM
Brandy, thank you so much for your kindness and support! I'm truly grateful! Xoxo
Date: 8/27/2024 4:50:00 PM
This was beauty to my senses. Perfecto. Congratulations on POTD.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Hilda! Xo
Date: 8/27/2024 2:04:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD. Very well deserved. Thanks for sharing.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:52:00 PM
Thank you! Xo
Date: 8/27/2024 12:34:00 PM
An appreciative rendering worthy for my remembering, effects it to exist on my Fave list, Jessica. Aloha William
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:52:00 PM
I am honored, William! Thanks so much! Xoxo
Date: 8/27/2024 11:12:00 AM
Aww, poetry that soothes and enhances the rapturous sense of communing with eternity. A worthy Potd Jessica. Congratulations! Enjoy your day! ~I Am Anaya
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much! Xoxo
Date: 8/27/2024 10:09:00 AM
Jessica, congratulations on your POTD. With feeling. Beautiful. Have a Great Day.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:53:00 PM
I appreciate that so much! Xo
Date: 8/27/2024 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Xoxo
Date: 8/27/2024 8:50:00 AM
Jessica, you have penned a truly beautiful poem full of emotion and imagery, congratulations on your well deserved POEM OF THE DAY honor, FAV, blessings, Constance
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, I'm truly honored! Xoxo
Date: 8/27/2024 8:08:00 AM
The haunting imagery and message of your brilliant sonnet moves this reader to contemplate what he rarely, if ever, bothers to notice -- that which preceded his inconsequential life by eons and will live on eons after he's gone. Bravo, Jessica! (P.S., I prefer 'aeons,' but I don't like those red squiggles under the word when I spell it that way ~ gw).
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/29/2024 7:57:00 PM
lol I truly appreciate that, GW! (And I'm with you on the extra vowel- If only those red squiggles had better taste!)
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