Retiree Returnee

Maunakea comes
into view. Coastlines 
from right side windows.
Hilo, my hometown.
Soon we’ll be landing.

I feel the plane
stop and cargo
door with luggage
bumps hold, thumps ramp.

Passengers
and crew says
Aloha.

Flowered
crowned lei.

FRUITS!

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Paula Goldsmith

December 18, 2024 at 8:06 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Retiree Returnee" write. You are so lucky to live where you do. Great Pictures.... Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

William Kelii Kekaula

December 19, 2024 at 11:46 AM

Great of your dutiful posting that goes unwavering, Paula. Mahalo always my friend. Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick

December 17, 2024 at 3:29 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. You brought your hometown to life in this short work. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula

December 17, 2024 at 7:58 AM

I am very pleased with the course of this challenge had taken marked by the measure of delightful commentaries it had received. It was a surprising piece and I had fun doing it. Mahalo, Sara for my placement for I'm truly honored. Aloha~William