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Free Verse   ---   2025 January 11

 

Teal entreats and cuddles the appellant granted gifts a third spun away and sprung a new course to breathe a new blend of Flora life amidst the Fungi and Fauna breeds. Soon it'll cast a shade of dryness and thirst for the blues, soothe all those who will drink and sop in the order to stay above and be watered. A sway to filtering reds and oranges rustling in its fall, building in heaps as an old raker takes a coffee break watching future rakers, frolics about them. It's not until the winds blow them away and maintain a steady course of Ivory flakes. They kiss the virgin ground as an introduction that winter snow will tether about and around. As it mounts up so Frosty's can dot neighborhood front homes, with roads for precious souls to view besides colorful well-lit front yards, decorate interiors and their immediate exteriors All are processing those distinctive Ivory flakes where no two are alike. Their crystalline prisms boast for a while hosting their time as their own. Ivory particles and or Ivory flakes bless the grounds, as well as the eyes that behold them. Melting does not rob memory bliss, as the fortunate beating hearts pause for a short period as the first sunrise, adrift the last Ivory Flake as they kiss their nose-tips ... a fond farewell.

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Date: 2/4/2025 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "ivory flakes" write. Great/Pretty Picture... Love Your Ending... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 2/4/2025 7:46:00 AM
Dear Hilo Poet, A very deep and profound take on the prompt, it made me pause and think deep, and i love your wordplay, so sumptuous and unique and well articulated and presented too with a stunning picture! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest
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