One Tear

One tear slides down a slanted cheek
A silver line, the only sign

Of anguish which she does not speak
Insistent smiles, bright by design

Thin fortitude, her whitewashed shrine
Gilded answers rain, lily meek

She lies and says that she is fine
When truth is too fearsome to seek

2/1/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Absolutely delighted to no end, like being in an empty pharmacy, Michelle, I'm glad that this oldie, certainly a goldie, have crossed my path, whereto, the life of my Faves now expands my friend, Aloha!
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:38 PM
I am again flattered, thank you for your warm comments, William!
Barden Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:28 PM
Oh, I love this one - to me, our greatest tool is the imagination of the READER, and our duty to get their wheels spinning - to not say TOO much, but plant seeds for them to grow their own story ... this does that perfectly! (Check out my "ice to eyes" sometime - John W and I were just chatting about this subject). Faved! :o) <3
Faulkner Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Yes, I agree that poems which are implied, rather than explicit, can be more resonant-
Watt Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Michelle, this kind of hidden sadness surrounds us. It's so hard to find those whom we can trust, but even if we do, sharing our sadness is still so difficult. "Gilded answers rain, lily meek" is my favorite line of this touching, heartfelt poem. Congrats to you on your win ~ John
Faulkner Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 11:07 AM
I am touched and humbled by your thoughtful comment, John, thank you
Wolf Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Yes. Often easier to tell a lie than confront the brutal truthy. Great win in the contest, Michelle! ~ Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Appreciate your kind words, Gershon!
Messina Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 1:17 PM
This is great, Michelle. Written so well...truth hurts (sometimes) Well done. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
Faulkner Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, Charlie-
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Ooh, well penned piece, good luck in the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 12:01 AM
Appreciate your comment, thank you#
Neumann Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 4:30 AM
Truth can be such an enigma ...
Faulkner Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 9:35 PM
It is one of life's mysteries-
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Wow. Your simple but elegant description of her is so impactful.
Faulkner Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Thank you, Andrea
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Simply superb, Michelle. A FAVE for me. Thanks, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:21 PM
I am touched by your generous words, many thanks, Gershon-
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Often tears are hidden...one slides, the rest on the inside!
Faulkner Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:19 PM
One tear is just the beginning - very glad for your comment, Kim
Leffanta Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 6:40 PM
You must be on the same wave-length as Lindsay! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Faulkner Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Guess I'll have to see some of his now, thanks for commenting
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 5:27 PM
A poem i can certainly relate to michelle and at certain times of our lives I think many of us are in this type of situation and its far easier to mask our emotions and soldier on. Adding tbis to my faves for so many reasons:-) hugs Jan xx a
Faulkner Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:16 PM
I guess I see the world more darkly now - so appreciate your support, Jan
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Ooh, ouch. Powerfully, eloquently conveyed. xomo
Faulkner Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen-
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