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Lyric   ---   2025 January 12

Glenn Hughes The Way It Is (CD) Expanded  Album (UK IMPORT) - Picture 1 of 1

 

A scarlet daydreamer marbled in blue velvet marooned in confidence mired in yucky mucky chucks Twas a heist at gunpoint to honor those petted I have brained the threshold and my mind turned to suds On the premature notion that I have accepted I have slipped and slid on a bed of clipped rosebuds I have cast mirrors to purpose hexed My expectations demanded the least contention I cannot fathom the necessity for compassion The visual aspects do not summon a cry for vexation The certainties will formulate its need for satisfaction I require life touches to ensure my future I ought to lift higher and higher like a soul sensation I must smooch with our solar star curvature The certainties will formulate its need for satisfaction Need for satisfaction Ride captain ride onboard my mystery ship Chart by stars sways the course Yet a fragile world spurns to its lip Of its inner voices of remorse I am no redeemer but an apple chip I need to be merely left as none to procrastination unburied and left to stare at the granite tombstone The certainties will formulate its need for satisfaction I found my want to be left as an abandon I do not need benevolent funds from association And I deplore closeted affection The certainties will formulate its need for satisfaction I am lacking for a good connection I need Dai-lee llamas that traverse the Andes ascension The certainties will formulate its need for satisfaction.

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Date: 2/5/2025 8:51:00 PM
Nice choice of song and beautiful remake. congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 2/5/2025 12:39:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Congrats on your placement. The next Glenn Hughes contest has just started!!!
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Date: 1/12/2025 2:15:00 PM
Always wondered if you were an apple chip or a cherry pit. This clarifies so much William. Nice Glennsong
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/12/2025 4:11:00 PM
I stretched beyond the simplistic words being redefined, and articulated a better course. Mahalo~William

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