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The Smile In Your Eyes

I lost myself in the smile of your eyes And found the world around would disappear I welcomed your arms with all it implies And felt the warmth of your smile coming near To nourish my heart with love so it blooms In my realm of brighter shades that was dark To bring to it such vibrant colored plumes And add beauty to this life we'll embark Like thieves in the night treasures to capture We will steal the days and build a rampart And drink from the cup of passion's rapture To run with the winds the winds are our heart Whether dusk of dawn or a sunset's splay Gave you my heart when I asked you to stay 3/16/18

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Date: 2/16/2022 1:28:00 AM
The flow, its message, well-balanced rhythm all culminate in it being a Fave, Frederic, my compliments of its winning entry via your heart and soul my friend, Aloha~William!
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Date: 2/14/2022 12:30:00 PM
I found this wonderful poem to be touching and sensitive in its rich and textured script. Beautiful! Lonna
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Date: 3/16/2018 7:28:00 PM
An absolutely beautiful sonnet of romantic passion, Frederic. Superb imagery and emotional expression. I certainly enjoyed the musical piece as well. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/16/2018 1:06:00 PM
- A romantic and beautiful poem, Frederic :) - Opening line says it all :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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