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Quatern   ----   2024 December 20

 

My Afterthought's My Goal

My afterthought is my goal--precedes me,
My health and healing is my main concern,
All else is fairly addressed--and not key,
My patience requires my good return.

Good hopes and goodwill--righteousness succeeds,
My afterthought is my goal--precedes me,
Glory be His name, as illness concedes,
Treatment and proper care will set me free.

An amicable life leads properly,
A blessed future will be my reward,
My afterthought is my goal--precedes me,
Well-kept focus, one mind, and one accord.

My faith is strong in Christ's saving Grace,
My good health is healing internally,
My health accompanies me to first base,
My afterthought is my goal--precedes me,
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations... I enjoyed reading your powerful write. So glad you have a strong faith. Have A Happy/Blessed New Year 2025......................................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:00 PM
As we draw ever so closely to that blesseth event, Paula. I pass my mahalo and a welcoming Happy 2025th New Year. Aloha~William
Alex Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:32 AM
"Good hopes and goodwill--righteousness succeeds", "My faith is strong in Christ's saving grace"—a" faith and optimism-filled poem. Congratulations! How is your health now? Once again, I wish you a very happy New Year!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:49 AM
I am less bed bound and sit up a bit more, and soon i will have the use of a wheelchair until I am able to walk out from here, Christura my friend. Mahalo~William
Narain Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Strong faith based poem. Hope you get better soon.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 10:01 AM
A hearty grateful thanks, Jay. Aloha~William
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 7:21 PM
I am glad you have strong faith!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 8:03 PM
I am truly grateful for you, Kim. Aloha~William
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