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Quatern   ----   2024 December 20

 

My afterthought is my goal--precedes me, My health and healing is my main concern, All else is fairly addressed--and not key, My patience requires my good return. Good hopes and goodwill--righteousness succeeds, My afterthought is my goal--precedes me, Glory be His name, as illness concedes, Treatment and proper care will set me free. An amicable life leads properly, A blessed future will be my reward, My afterthought is my goal--precedes me, Well-kept focus, one mind, and one accord. My faith is strong in Christ's saving Grace, My good health is healing internally, My health accompanies me to first base, My afterthought is my goal--precedes me,

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Date: 12/30/2024 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations... I enjoyed reading your powerful write. So glad you have a strong faith. Have A Happy/Blessed New Year 2025......................................
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/30/2024 1:00:00 PM
As we draw ever so closely to that blesseth event, Paula. I pass my mahalo and a welcoming Happy 2025th New Year. Aloha~William
Date: 12/30/2024 7:32:00 AM
"Good hopes and goodwill--righteousness succeeds", "My faith is strong in Christ's saving grace"—a" faith and optimism-filled poem. Congratulations! How is your health now? Once again, I wish you a very happy New Year!
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Date: 12/30/2024 7:49:00 AM
I am less bed bound and sit up a bit more, and soon i will have the use of a wheelchair until I am able to walk out from here, Christura my friend. Mahalo~William
Date: 12/21/2024 9:51:00 AM
Strong faith based poem. Hope you get better soon.
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Date: 12/21/2024 10:01:00 AM
A hearty grateful thanks, Jay. Aloha~William
Date: 12/20/2024 7:21:00 PM
I am glad you have strong faith!
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Date: 12/20/2024 8:03:00 PM
I am truly grateful for you, Kim. Aloha~William

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